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If I'm reading the thread, I may as well comment on it. One quick remark is that I think some of these chapters are a tad bit too short. I've heard that generally, people prefer chapters around 1.5k to 2k words in length, and these are way below that so far. The prologue is a bit absurd and I...

It'd be about what I expected

Reading The Peach of Petalik. To start off, I don't really see the point in the author's note. It gives no information that isn't in the synopsis besides the fact that the author knows what they're doing, which doesn't need to be said imo. The reader can figure that by reading First, I have...

Oh my God at long last somebody sort of liked the cover a little Thanks for the feedback, one day I'll figure out how to make Chapter 1 do more to hook ❤️

I've set out to review this, but I need to ask you first, where do I even start reading from? The first two chapters I read are seemingly disconnected short stories that take place in the same town, and upon starting the third I see it also doesn't seem connected. Is this something where these...

On chapter 10* as of now. Sophia's dad is my favorite of the sidecast definitely As for the wolf, my best guess is that he's a former werewolf that lost his humanity. One thing I'd look forward to is seeing a wider range of occult stuff, but idk if this is that sort of story

I always find myself forgetting to give my thoughts on the synopsis and cover image, so I'll write this first. Cover art is neat. Interrobang, but the synopsis does inform me well as to what to expect. Moving onto the story. Chapter 1 is a decent introduction to the main character. Her day is...

That's probably a good idea, but random people on the internet are also a solid resource I think. If I'm lucky, they'll give me a nice average reader perspective

Neat feedback thread Idk if my story is gripping enough for even an average attention span, but I will make an attempt. Only four chapters rn, so that's a plus Here you go

Thoroughly enjoyed the prologue, especially the ending. I don't understand the bio-engineering stuff even a little bit, so I don't know how accurate it is, but it reads pretty nice. Whenever I read "Hedi Slimane" I think of that one account on TikTok and get a smile on my face. But, when we get...

That's a pretty good idea, ngl. I'm writing a chapter myself rn, so I'll close the thread from new submissions for a bit. I'll be working through this backlog at a solid rate, dw

The synopsis is definitely attention grabbing. This isn't a genre I typically read, but I think the prologue does a good job giving you some romance as a hook, though I think it could do with a bit more information on the siege conditions before we get into the tent with them. Leksa and Demyan...

Probably for it to be someone's favorite story, that'd be great

I like the cover art. Getting into the story, we're met with a really fast paced prologue. I think I'd complain that it was too fast, but it actually segues quite nicely into the protagonist "waking up" in chapter 1. But, we also pretty much immediately toss him through time after a single...

I'm a little busy rn, but I'll be free soon and I'll tend to a few more. I'm still alive

Here is the promised feedback: To start with the synopsis, it's pretty good I'd say. It does its job in giving a good idea about what to expect from the story and the kind of cast we'll have, not much to say here. I'll give my thoughts chapter by chapter before giving a sum-up. Chapter 1: It's...

I'm reading foxes' work now, after which I'll get to as much as I can Reading Princess Possession. The synopsis is okay. I feel like you could definitely do better with it, because as it stands, even though it does tell us about the story, I think it's pretty bland. Cool art, btw. As for the...

Added everything to reading library, will get to by tomorrow

Some mysterious force has turned me towards this thread I'll give my feedback sometime today :)

I suffer from blindness to all threads ever I need the links placed in front of me or I can't find them