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  1. ConcubusBunny

    Uh, help?

    Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. After I had posted my chapter I was finally satisfied that it was finally published but something weird happened, for whatever reason the story didn't show up in the latest update. I want to know if this was a bug or what? I'm really lost.
  2. ConcubusBunny

    Feedback on my story

    So, I finally finished my first chapter but I want some feedback on the quality of the chapter plus some tips on grammar mistakes that you find and any critique will be helpful https://www.scribblehub.com/read/343438-din-world/chapter/344753/
  3. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Psychopaths

    Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. so while editing some parts of my story something struck me, how people will perceive my psychopath character. Now the way I wrote is not the calculative emotionless husk that's dangerous... Okay they are, but most all the other MC's are. Unlike popular media...
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    Toilet thought: Bend that bended gender

    Hello my guys, gals and enby pals Now I've been reading some gender bender stories where mc gets turned into a girl, when a thought came to, why don't they just transition back to being a guy or something in-between. yeah I know most of them are in a fantasy world setting, but it just feels a...
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    Toilet thoughts: How smutty is too smutty

    Chaotic enby on the toilet. hello, my guys, gals and enby pals. so while on the ol' John I began to ponder how graphic are the smut scenes on it web novel site. how far are permitted to go? How descriptive are the sec scenes? should I bother posting on sites like webnovel, honeyfeed or royalroad...
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    I didn't even get to post yet

    Lazy chaotic enby Hello, all my guys, gals and enby pals. So I posted my content warning for what to expect for my book a few days ago the first chapter is taking longer than I'd like to finish. When I checked it out of curiosity and I already have a 1-star rating as well as a 5-star rating. I...
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    Toilet thoughts: busty boi/boy partial fetish.

    Chaotic enby heading to the toilet Hello, guys, gals and enby pals when I checked my hentai and then I got an idea. Adding bust boy/boi's characters to my web novel. Now for those of you who have no idea what this is go to newgrounds and furaffinity then come back. Now onto my depraved, now...
  8. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thought: SEX!

    Lazy chaotic enby. Hello, Guys, gals and enby pals Now I was off the toilet thinking being generally lazy when something hit me, sex... jokes. I never really see it in web novels or I'm just an idiot but I never see sex jokes in a smut web novel while it's everywhere in a adult cartoons, so like...
  9. ConcubusBunny

    What do you guys think of Spiderman, house of venom

    Hello my guys, gals, and enby pals your resident chaotic enby here. So I came across this (by the way click below if you want to read the story) At first, the switching of point of view from character to character was weird, it's like an omniscient 1st and 2nd person type thing that actually...
  10. ConcubusBunny

    Chaotic enby thoughts: Character pov switch thought for multiple MC'S

    Chaotic enby thinking Hello my guys, gals and enby pals so as I was plotting out a scene something weird happened I wanted to know how you people will react now the current mc comes back home and has a chat with their life partner and their friends after the chapter ends the next one will make...
  11. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Internal x external conflict

    chaotic enby thinking. Hello my guys, gals and enby pals, so while on my good old thinking toilet again something came to me that I didn't pay much attention to until just now my MC's internal and external conflicts. now I write multiple Mc's so this really worried me but how would you go...
  12. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Pure evil

    What? You think just cause I'm a greatest force of evil I won't save you? That hurts my feelings if something happens to you I'll have less toys to play so no this doesn't mean I'll turn over a new leaf or do more "good" it just you aren't dying today-- Joker. Chaotic enby thinking on the...
  13. ConcubusBunny

    While on the toilet: Characters alignment

    If everyone truly has a moral compass then why does the world have an attribute to what's considered good or evil? Is being good simply doing what the populos considers to be right? Just? Or something else? Is a moral compass something people in power put into the minds of the masses to control...
  14. ConcubusBunny

    All the best ideas are on the toilet

    Hello my lovely guys, gala and enby pals, so this a weird one so little while ago while I was in dah toilet something odd happened, I went on Wattpad, yeah I know they aren't exactly known for writing master pieces they tell decent stories. Anyway when I noticed on my trashy fem deku fanfic it...
  15. ConcubusBunny

    Character pov + omniscient pov hybrid for multiple mc's

    Hello my lovely guys, gals and enby pals I want to your insight on something, I wanted to creat a multiple mc story but lack of interesting stories or advice has helped and no trying to follow a story with a huge cast of characters hasn't helped me in this regard either, cause it just didn't...
  16. ConcubusBunny

    Is making an intersex character fetish fuel

    Hello my lovely guys, gals and enby pals I just wanna know is making an intersex character fetish fuel? What's your opinion on this? How will you perceive my characters? I had this on my mind for a long ass time and needed to hear someone else's opinion, I mean I'm still going ahead with it but...
  17. ConcubusBunny

    Well I've had this in my mind for a while and now you will too

    So guys, gals and enby pals, I've had a little cursed thought bubble in my head that I need your input on it .... SCAT! You probably need more information to make Sense of the this, well while indulging in some good old nsfl I thought "what if I added consentual scat or water sport...
  18. ConcubusBunny

    Writing I need a better synopsis

    Above is is my current web novel that I'm writing (not posted yet) that needs a better synopsis so I came here in hopes of getting some advice on how to make it better. I guess I should add some extra details though to get people to have a better understanding with what I'm trying to make. The...
  19. ConcubusBunny

    I need an activity in my story

    So I'm kinda in a rut guys I'm in the middle of a resting period before the second wave of the beginning plot of my story but I need a bunch of activities for my group of miscreants to do while I'm waiting for the plot to progress. This part is somewhat important to their characterization and...
  20. ConcubusBunny

    Smut writers when is the best time to smut??

    I am a new writer and I'd like to know how some smut writers write their smut to be honest I thought it'd be good to put it out there to do and get feed back on how smutty our smut should be also to get feedback on places to put smut where it shouldn't even belong to obstruct the actual plot, I...
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