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  1. ConcubusBunny

    Writing I need assistance with another scene

    Hello guys, gals and enby pals. I have a scene that I don't half ass cause it is important for character development of my MC, a supporting character and plot for a huge part of the story. It might be a bit confusing but I'll try explaining as best that I can. After the advice from my previous...
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    I need feedback on my AU

    I need feedback on the first chapter of an AU I did, any advice to improve will be appreciated. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/384556/sorcerer-kingdom-alliance-au/
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    Uuuh help

    Hello guys, gals and enby pals. I need help, I just posted a new novel, but it's not showing in latest or in my series list. I don't know what to do.
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    edited cover art

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    I need assistance with a scene

    Hello guy, gals and enby pals. So I've got this dilemma that I need some input on a scene I'm planning and this will be hard explain, but here goes. After a village was nearly destroyed and a large number of the citizen lives lost by a neighboring nation. Two sisters- one older and one younger...
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    I summon thee to help with litrpg world building

    Hello enby pals, guys and gals So I had this idea for a litrpg in which it's not really a litrpg. So the thing I wanted to try is that I science fantasy world has a sorta system, but less of the game Mechanic's implemented. So this is what I've been able to come up with so far. you can't know a...
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    I summon thee to assist me in world building

    Hello gals, guys and enby pals. I've gotta dilemma on my hands. So I've I'm trying to refine the world of my science fantasy story, but I want the guns the world to be less in use and people of the world use non firearm melee weapons, but I stumped in finding a good excuse as to why everyone...
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    I summon thee to help me write a sassy character

    Hello enby pals, gals and guys. I summon the power of the forum dweller's to aid me in my quest. I need a way to portray sassy character as not so annoying like I see a lot of creators make. They think being a dick means quirky or sassy little fun character I want a way to make them fun, but...
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    Should the Naruto fanfic be a normal story then

    While casually posting an idea I had in my head not really thinking that anyone will pay much mind I got an unexpected feedback from the forum wandered, urging me to make it an original series since the fanfic deviated so far from the original that it might as well be. I decided to run with it...
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    Naruto fanfic idea

    Naruto world but with monster and demonic spirits instead of just the tailed beasts. While reading a Naruto fanfic and a monster fantasy story in tandem, this idea sorta formed in my head I wanted to get to work on it right away, but I've got other stuff to do so just wanted to put this out...
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    Toilet thoughts: to fin or not to fin

    Hello my guys gals and enby pals. I'm sorta on the bench about this but I need this for my fish people. Also as a side note the fins have special muscles that can function like a humanoid hand.
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    Is this so wrong

    Hello enby pals, gals and guys I've got a sorta dilemma regarding my character description dump. I began contemplating if it's a good idea to keep it that way instead of spreading it out through out the story, which I don't want to do. On one hand everyone gets a clear picture of what the...
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    Toilet thoughts: Improvement on a charcter

    Hello my gals guys and enby pals. I need advice on how to make my character more rounded. I've got a sorta good handle on some others, but one still bothers me. My dizzy drunk, shameless, thoughtless, one track mind, barely focused salamander. But I want a way to flesh them out more right now...
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    Toilet thoughts: How do you "characterize"

    Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. So while writing, I noticed something that I didn't really consider prior. How do I characterize my cast? I have some idea, but for the most part, I'm completely lost. I want to make them very distinguishable from one another, taking tropes and putting little...
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    Looking for plot ideas for a sonic AU

    Hello guys, gals and enby pals. I decided to take up an au for sonic which I love Now I can't get to it immediately cause I already have a series I'm working on and can't do two at the same time. I want to know what plot points you'd like to see in a sonic non lore friendly au. I was hoping to...
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    Toilet thoughts: Harem or sex friends that is the question

    Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. Now I was thinking on the old John when something strange happened, is the sex friends tags related to the harem genre. Now you may asking yourself well of course it, but then what's the polygamy/andry tag for then? I began to wonder if you had a tag for sex...
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    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    While coasting through web novels like a phantom I realized that there are no soft masculine main character. I've only seen the hardened suck the fun out of everything I must be the strongest. And I got to say it's pretty boring to read 100 MC's that are mostly the same. Now I don't mean the...
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    Toilet thoughts: Redemption arc plot thread I'm trying to work out.

    Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. Okay, so I got some bad guys where some want to be good but then want to be redeemed into bad guys again and want to make their shift in character believable, but one of their friends tells them that they can't do that cause they aren't as bad as them. I also...
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    Toilet thoughts: Thought experiment

    Mad scientist enby hello my guys, gals and enby pals. So, I got myself a thought experiment for you all. And for this thought experiment to go more smoothly I'm gonna need you to suspend your disbelief on psychopaths. Pretend the only thing that you know about them is that they have little to...
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    Toilet thoughts: Important info in paragraph

    Hello guys, gals and enby pals While reading a few minutes ago I began to wonder why do some author's put info or world building in a random paragraph. For me I always use the anime view when writing; whatever I can show within a frame is what the reader gets, all other stuff like extra info or...
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