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stop being a little bitch. Life is never luck. Its choices. And you just are not able to calculate everything and make the right choice. Nobody is able to. God is tho. But then your little ass says, religion is a coping mechanism. Like bro have you studied all the religion? Ofc not. You...

Well, i wanted to dive deeper tho.

How do i improve on this? Any book recommendations for this or smth? For some reason i feel insecure about this. It has been years since i had read about english punctuation and those were some dumb shit at that.

If he is religious then no. If he is a retarded atheist then yes.

Shut it retard. Yeah, when i read a something written worse than mine, then i feel like 'Oh mine's not that bad' but when its about reading the top of the game, the same feeling doesn't exist. Yep, waiting for that realization to hit. I mean come from heart. Thing is i would never aim for...

You know, i know, everybody knows. But can't stop it, right? Damn! I really struggle with this a lot. Man, the fact that i am afraid of writing bad words make me feel like shit. It's just like procrastination. Similar, really.

Sex can be used as a voilent mean but the difference is, let's take it as someone is killed and another person is raped, then suffered more? The victim of rape ofc. But if the person 'A' is not killed but tortured then? Weird that. Now sex is a taboo because it's animalistic, essentially sex can...

sweet- Cigarettes after sex

Murderer! You mudered me with your critisism! Now jokes aside thanks for the nitpicking. Well sun is a giant light bulb right? Okay you are right here. But he is wake now tho? Mc doesn't even know about birds lol And he is still a daze. So no, birds plays no part but just to describe a forest...

oh shit! I meant... Well something else haha Thanks but dropping for a 'i' is weird. I just posted a few paraghaps to see if it was alright and all. My story aren't a litrpg but rather a high fantasy aka isekai lol

""I sat cross-legged as the cold from the soil reached up to me; waking me out of my thoughts. I’d first think it was just a dream, something that i could wake up from but not anymore. As i saw the sun move, reach out and climb its way down, my heart grew cold along with it. The wind was...

I read the latest one and why tf do I see chomp as the first sentence? You writing in first pov? If so should start with 'i heard blah blah' Well to be honest I don't think Im gonna continue after the first couple of paragraphs,sorry it just ...

Exactly why you should have done some kind of research of sorts like asking your seniors perhaps? Sheesh nft?

I am now feeling pity for you old Foxes. But I must thank you guys for your valuable sacrifice, letting the young ones know bout this stuff. For some reason you sound like a pushover? I mean are you blaming what exactly? Family? Environment? Something like that? Anyways congrats learning a...

All of them are clichés. Only proper execution can make it better

Life is boring until it hits its first plot point..

Currently writing high fantasy so research about nobility and stuff.

Stepdad in a sense tho

That was rudeus!

This thread begs the question, How the fuck do you determine the winner? xD what's the time limit??