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So I was about to write a chapter. But the thing is this is a memory? My story is in first person perspective and even in this scene we will be following the mc's view. But now, mc was seeing things from a certain characters eye and that itself is a memory. Basically, mc is seeing things but...

only exception, no xianxia bullshit.

Do you want to make money real bad? How much is your conviction. I mean it's really easy to say I want to, but really do you? I mean can you work when you are sick? When you feel like shit? When there is no urge? You don't have to work. But you should still get up and sit there. if you have that...

Good thing you aren't important, right? Lmaoo

Great advice! I will work on that. Now you said you have read till chap 3. So can you expand a little bit more on those? I agree with you that I should add a few more mc's thoughts but I wanted to keep it slightly mysterious but that said, I should still add some thoughts nonetheless. After...

Sure. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/652276/mystery-weaver/

Honestly, honeyfeed has the worst interface I'd ever seen for posting i mean. It doesn't even have scheduled function, or does it? the way comments are arranged also bothers me. One thing what's good is, I got two comments with relatively less views.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/62563/mystery-weavera-progression-portalisekai-fantasy Here is mine!

Had an incredible outlining session. So excited to write it tmmrw!

Oh sheesh! Must had a bad day lol

Which one?

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/62563/mystery-weavera-progression-portalisekai-fantasy Please don't mind some slight inconsistencies hahaha. Review here for now. Rather than saying 5 chapter how about telling a word count? I mean that sounds more fair...

Nay sour tooth for me lol. Sugar is bad for health too. Diabetes, excess fat, etc.

First thank you for the detailed review. Now do you have any recommendation of fiction/non fiction with first person? I have been wanting to study some.

If you may then, https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/62563/mystery-weavera-progression-portalisekai-fantasy/chapter/1093204/chapter-6-blames-and-promises Now that since it's my chapter(6) and you said you are not going to read more than one, which is fine, I would love to hear your thoughts on...

scheduled a chapter! Shorter than usual but hey!

Less than 1k is not good, at least make it 1k, preferably 1.5 to 2k chapter. As for not being able to write, outline the story even a little.

No, You mean using this power? If so, this is literraly the starting rank and powers gets more insane each time. Besides this is not the final version since this seems to be almost based on shifting.

One of the beginner rank for my story! Although i am uncertain about the 'belief' part. Probably will change this Novice Shifter: 1.Can only shift small parts of their body, such as their fingers or ears and as they proceed to understand their 'belief' they can change their face too, they...

Got to properly define a magic rank!