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  1. JustHANO

    Strongest Fictional Creature/Type of God

    Anyone tagged as a parody character.
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    Roleplaying - Dungeons & Dragons

    Ayy, Paladin brethren. I'm an orc paladin, we'll probably have some disagreements.
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    Contribute one sentence each to make a story~

    "Speak of the devil, there she is. Not your little house you use yo know huh, " his friend said, gesturing towards the house that was now a mansion.
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    But League players are so...

    People get away with being toxic to much for me to play seriously anymore. I wasn't that good anyways, but the simple fact that i can be a smartass toxic asshole in chat and never get chat restricted for like 6 seasons just shows they don't care. It's all fun and games until you're trying to not...
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    Contribute one sentence each to make a story~

    The house decides against getting evolved with the man's complicated harem, getting up and leaving instead.
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    Roleplaying - Dungeons & Dragons

    Am I allowed to join still? First time playing DnD but I've always wanted to try.
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    Writing Prompt (Game simulation)A double teamed Coup d'état for DC.

    "For every minute you stay in office, a US citizen will die, " I yelled through the megaphone. "We don't negotiate with a terrorist!" The President yells back. "We are not terrorist, we are visionaries. As visionaries, we see a future without violence and without you! We, the US taxpayers...
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    Writing Do you write out sheets of your characters and general story line?

    I was, for a bunch of stories I ended up not writing. They became daunting and wasteful, not being able to move on until I figured out this one small detail that probably won't be necessary. I've done it for my big story, but now I kinda keep characters in my head and write out some scenes...
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    The Quote Depository

    "Even a wet paint sign has to lie at some point." - my best friend one night when we were drunk.
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    Can't figure out a fictional abbreviation genre for a fiction game.

    If it's virtual reality we can assume it's first person. Virtual Real Time Tactical Shooter Virtual Real Time Strategical Shooter.
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    Feedback for Trade Me

    Goddamn, these paragraphs are intimidating. I'm not one to knock formatting because if a story interests me enough, ill read it no matter the format. Some people *cough same ones who knocked mines cough* are real uppity about that. I feel just to bring in those viewers its best if you smack the...
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    Feedback for Trade Me

    You should link the page here. I'll head over tho
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    scribble thread

    Let's see let's start with a story. A story about a boy named wolr.l just noticed I got auto correct. I have an unfair advantage on. Just like then the boy named wolr ge had an advantage room m. That was suppose to be too . He abused this advantage to become 9ne 9f the strongest mages known...
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    What genres are you used to writing?

    I write like comedy actions but I try to do romance in writing prompts. Any chance I get to branch out I try.
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    How do you write a flashback into the middle of a chapter?

    Damn. That why I've been stuck. I'm a full on member of the flashbacks sucks club. I want to make that movie/show type dynamics but I'll see what I can do.
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    Writing Prompt In a world where giant crabs roam the surface one man...

    One man... stood before one and bravely asked, "is it true your kind is immortal? Forever growing, protected by your hard shell, only to succumb to the inevitable of worldly diseases? With such power, why would you risk exploring the surface world, where human seek and hunt your kind? Is it...
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    Feedback/Reviews

    Yes by all means, dont feel the need to build around my opinion. I'm glad there's more of a reason why you're not describing them than just writing preference tho. I would suggest putting that part in spoilers tho, dont wanna ruin that twist for your readers who may come across this thread.
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    I need Reviews for my Novel

    Also as my review I dont see any glaring issues. 1st chapter was kinda boring, but world building needs to get done. I was interested in understanding the programs more, so I'll probably read more while I'm procastinating. I'm not really a reader, so when there's a joke/explanation I dont...
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    I need Reviews for my Novel

    Naw the only one that's a lil confusing is "Hey, is this where you pass the admission paper?" realizing that there was a sign Admission Stand at the table, "Duh, well here you go. Eugene Houston, Hero Program" he said laughing nervously. And it's not that hard to understand with a...
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    Looking for feedback on first chapter of my new story

    I really can't. I enjoyed it too much. The character was enjoyable and described very well. Used really descriptive words to explain the pains. Yeah I ain't got nothing bad to say.
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