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    Y E E t what up how's a life holding up fer ya? I'm definitely not drowning in my thesis...

    Y E E t what up how's a life holding up fer ya? I'm definitely not drowning in my thesis hahahaha haha....
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    Probably probing the waters. SH is relatively new after all Or like me find it hard to say much...

    Probably probing the waters. SH is relatively new after all Or like me find it hard to say much about the story
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    Time to spam them forums Ahaha I mean Be productive

    Time to spam them forums Ahaha I mean Be productive
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    Uhya theres really not much activity on forums yet.

    Uhya theres really not much activity on forums yet.
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    Hoping for some feedback

    Your story is pretty interesting! I read through till the latest chapter and boy did it leave me hanging on my seat. Although the pacing needs some work and there are a few missing words here and there the development is pretty solid and could still leave some impact on the reader. In my...
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    Looking for feedback on LitRPG story.

    No problemo. Don't push yourself too hard to get the reason for why your character wants to live because it doesn't really need to be huge and grand. It could simply be because she wants to see the world, or she likes to see the sun rise and decides it's worth living another day to see that. The...
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    Looking for feedback on LitRPG story.

    Your story seems to have a solid general direction, the writing is also pretty ok from what I've seen and I have no complaints with the pacing. Your story is in first person and doesn't have much of the pet peeves I have with the writing style. Your story looks pretty stable to me from what...
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    Ask for advice!

    I speed read through the 1st chapter. In my opinion the writing is pretty understandable however if I were to be picky I'd say to work on your tenses. Some of the words used were in the wrong tense and other sentences come out as weird flow wise. I took the liberty of analyzing a portion of your...
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    The Day You Became A Decent Writer

    Hahaha sames I've been workinh on this certain story for 3 years now but the thing is I've never gone past 5 chapters. Life is very sporadic when it demands things from me. Crie
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    The Day You Became A Decent Writer

    welp if anyone wants to really see my baby steps you may find me on fanfiction.net under the same username but more recently I wrote a few stories I am quite proud of here's one: the backstory is that we had to write a short fiction continuation of a certain story we read in literature class...
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    What happened to the novel "The world seems realistic but why do I have a leveling system?"

    thanks to you both! I didn't see that thread ahahaha
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    What happened to the novel "The world seems realistic but why do I have a leveling system?"

    It was on my reading list and when I came back after a while to check how it's been going... Deleted! Why? This came suddenly to me without notice I need enlightenment upon this subject!
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    (Poll) Are you a writer or a reader?

    same feeling as those above, hahaha although I am more of a consumer I do sometimes write..... currently inactive writer though, reality takes up way too much energy
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    My Story Cover Illustration (Story: An Odd Rose, Love Critical Failure)

    Friend I believe the author mentioned gimp XD
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    How many chapters/words does a story need to have before you'll think about reading it?

    For ms it starts with the synopsis then reviews if there are any. I keep it on a stockpile list if it has anything below 10 or 20 chapters and wait till it reaches at least 50 then I go byhow mch I enjoy it.
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    Are you sometimes feel that you hate some part of your book?

    I usually hate those portions where I couldnt write it the way I wanted it to come out. Like if Im not satisfied with it and leave it alone that portion just nags at me as if it wants me to rewrite it till Im satisfied. Im in an endless cycle of editing that feels frustrating ahahahaha...
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    Recommendations FOOD NOVEL

    I have yet to scour scribble hub once more for food novels after coming back. Has any friend found some interesting ones?
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    Recommendations FOOD NOVEL

    Came back to this thread to see if anyone found a new Food Novel on Scribble Hub. None? Sad......
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    Need Help on Settling Conflict

    Thank you thank you <3 Again big help for me I hope I can give this story some justice. Thank youuuuu
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