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  1. Garon

    Thoughts on "unwanted" feedback

    I had this problem. At the end of each chapter I asked if there were any errors in the plot or in the behavior of the characters. But the empty howls in the comments made it clear that there was no point in this, and allowed me to understand how persistent I was. Although in my defense I can say...
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    Is Realistic Novels specifically school setting Romance not your thing?

    as for me. They limit the author. My first story begins at the Academy, but this is not a school in the usual sense. Everyone there is an adult and behaves like that. Because writing a story about schoolchildren, for me, limits my possibilities for what I want.
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    You're mc parents. They bad or they death?

    I mean. Ava's mom cosplaying midir from God of war. I don't see any issues) I see a pattern. The authors kill the parents so as not to waste time on them, or to make the story dramatic and influence the mc. Quite a simple method in my opinion. But the absence or negative influence of parents on...
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    You're mc parents. They bad or they death?

    I've been noticing this trend a lot lately. Bad abusive parents or they're dead. Even in my novel, my mc's father is the worst person in the world. So I was wondering what kind of parents your mc has? Is there an objective reason for this?
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    Japanese novels and "Pheromones"

    mushoku tensei, I remembered the moment when Rudeus tried to force the red-haired girl (I don’t remember the name) to have sex with him. And he also tried to give her a pheromone potion. And then at the end of ranobe he says how pedophilia is bad lmao.
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    Writing smut feels illegal lol

    I don’t see anything illegal in this, unless you write smut with pedophilia and rape. Yes, this is illegal and disgusting.
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    Your expectation on a scifi/fantasy

    For me, magic or skafi should work for the story and characters. If they are not involved in the story, they rather serve more as background. That sucks for me.
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    Old man mc

    I started work on the second novella. And an idea came to my mind. What if my main mc is old guy. His experience and the fact of who he is (he is homeless) will help another mc find the meaning of life, directing her to the right path. And this will also allow me to write unusual dialogues and...
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    What is your top music/song to listen while writing the story?

    Аc dc, maid core, Dark Souls ost and linking park
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    Should I do this?

    Yes, the second novel helps not only to distract me to something else. But he also brings me ideas for the first novel. And I feel pleasure from the process, I am not worried about time. And my couple of readers have gotten used to my unstable schedule.
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    Should I do this?

    I want to start making a second novel. I already have one novel in the ongoing that is being read by twenty people. I don’t make novel's for the sake of a large audience, but for myself. And I’m interested in asking those who have several works in ongoing's at the same time. Is it worth it and...
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    What you can't do in youre story

    Your customer is a threat to society. I hope you don't encounter anything like this again.
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    What you can't do in youre story

    I respect it. There in sh. You can find some stories where a minor has sex. Sometimes it's even incest. So I'm not too impressed. And no, I'm not interested in money. I'm making history for myself. Not for some perverts. First you're position is good. Second what vore is?
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    What you can't do in youre story

    maybe I'm stupid. I don’t quite understand how this relates to the topic of my post. There are enough novels here where mc tries to sell weapons or create them that this is no longer so immoral. But everything is good for you. Sounds interesting to read.
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    What you can't do in youre story

    I have a problem with this. I give an approximate date of origin of any event. And then I try to understand how old the important characters were during these events. It hurts. I've read stories where mc is reborn into isekai. Where an evil character commits genocide of everything. And he...
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    What you can't do in youre story

    This makes novellas interesting for me. You can write a story in which you are not held back by public opinion. body horror sometimes helps in the design of the monster or antagonist. BUT. The whole story dedicated to this is already perversion for me. People complain that the death penalty on...
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    What you can't do in youre story

    This is a strange topic and I want to explain what I mean. What boundaries will you not force yourself to cross in your light novel? For example, I had an idea to make a novel where a time traveler goes to World War II to kill a funny guy with a mustache. But he understands what a terrible...
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    Your favorite couple in fictional media.

    Pico literally me
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    Who would you save or not?

    This is an ideal world. But it’s unlikely that people would love this trilogy without the tragedy.
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    Who would you save or not?

    it doesn't have to be salvation by defeating someone. You just have to convince the character that he will die if he does it. "Guts, trust me, if you don't kill Griffith, he will kill everyone and rape Casca." Yeah it's gonna be hard
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