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  1. Garon

    wtf moment made by mc

    "I mean if it's legal here. So I didn't do anything wrong" Ah response. Bruh who decided slave trope can be good. Only if your mc, save them and don't f*ck in the end it could work. I mean. Someone already did great example. But I have one. It was some yuri comic. (Don't remember how exactly...
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    wtf moment made by mc

    as is clear from the title. Give examples of moments when you were shocked by mc's actions. It could be from anywhere. And the more shocking, the more interesting.
  3. Garon

    Your MC needs to make a successful musical or else the town is destroyed

    my first mc is an introvert. It is much easier for her to kill her father than to participate in a musical in front of people. And she especially never sang in her life. The second one is just an old bum. He has enough of his own problems, so he will participate in chaos.
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    Vampire marriage and Fae dealings.

    the description fits a whole new story. Unless, of course, characters from your main story appear or are mentioned in it. But honestly it sounds interesting, you can still create good chemistry between the characters. a harem is always the way out).
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    How would you describe your main antagonist as poorly as possible?

    I have several of them. But I will choose the most important one. Kairu is a deity who does not understand, but tries to understand people. She believes that the boundaries of morality limit them. And she is trying to break it by giving all people access to power. Without understanding what...
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    Do its really good?

    I have some answers and characters to help you understand this more. But these are characters representing one side of the question rather than an exact answer. But I still have a long way to go. And I hope somehow I can complete the story. If you want, we can discuss this topic further. I don't...
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    Do its really good?

    We create our gods. And human beliefs can be controlled and changed. One of the theme in my story Yes. The people around me also require me to do a lot. They don't even know me for who I really am. And they constantly ask me to do this, do that. In the end, I understand that I cannot leave them...
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    Do its really good?

    Easy to say. I wanted rest if I could.
  9. Garon

    Do its really good?

    Oh, now I think I understand. I'll make it more readable. Also change some errors I could find Don't read. I don't force you champ
  10. Garon

    Do its really good?

    I see Wait sorry I can't see it. Where you see it exactly, am I blind.
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    Do its really good?

    Sorry for that, I fix that now
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    Do its really good?

    This is not an ordinary post. And it will be very long. I wanted to write a novel that was more like a one piece with elements of sex and yuri harem. And although I started the story gloomily, I wanted to continue it later in a more pleasant way. But then I realized that I wanted to put a...
  13. Garon

    Guys, drop your saddest one-liner.

    One day you will wake up. And you won't recognize your own face. Hello, goodbye, I love you. We live inside the dream.
  14. Garon

    Yuri arranged marriage

    Sounds and look interesting
  15. Garon

    Yuri arranged marriage

    I'm looking for a novel that focuses on an arranged marriage, and it has to be Yuri. And if it possible, I also don’t want there to be tragedy in it.
  16. Garon

    What did you learn today?

    I don't know if this is appropriate. But I finished watching Twin Peaks yesterday. And today I looked at a review of it. At first I didn't like the third season, I thought it was too complicated and pointless. It didn't have what I loved. The atmosphere, the characters, Laura in particular. But...
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    AI is going to revolutionize authors capabilities to create trailers and scenes

    As not ai, I fully respect it post. Ai gonna make great future for all of us
  18. Garon

    What is a good word count per week?

    Well, I'm going right way. Thanks
  19. Garon

    What are some of the most important aspects of writing smut?

    For me. Make it emotional and don't cringe. Nothing more
  20. Garon

    Do the villains win in your novel?

    The best way
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