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  1. KersenBloemNL

    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Open until further notice.

    I changed the second domino effect to “one that will..” and then the rest of the text. Thank you!!
  2. KersenBloemNL

    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Open until further notice.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/740799/aura-the-souls-true-nature/ I’m kinda curious now
  3. KersenBloemNL

    Very bad free feedback thread.

    Thanks! It’s a bit of a slow burn at the atart, yeah. But right now, it’s picking up the pace. I’m focusing on more action scenes, actually.
  4. KersenBloemNL

    Free bad feedback thread

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/740799/aura-the-souls-true-nature/ I wonder what your thoughts are on my story :)
  5. KersenBloemNL

    On a scale of 1-10, how powerful is your character?

    As everyone is a normal human in my story (some having a special power tho), 1 means weaker than a child and 10 means extremely strong. The protagonist is definetely at a 6-7. He just gets shafted due to not having the power system that my universe holds.
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I'm kinda curious about your "jank" "review" of my current webnovel: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/740799/aura-the-souls-true-nature/
  7. KersenBloemNL

    Im bored, what’s up with ya’ll

    The mc would just quietly drink coffee in his appartment, the villian I sadly can’t say as they haven’t been introduced
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    What media inspired your work?

    Inazuma eleven and Jojo’s, alongside a dash of everything else that I really love
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    Favorite quotes from your own works

    “Memories are supposed to be just that, yet, why do they affect the current time so much?” And “Let’s be real, you’re dead inside, anyways.”
  10. KersenBloemNL

    Bobple's Below Average Feedback Thread [Paused]

    Uni student who’s very busy! But i’m currently writing chapter 5, and i’ve been on fire the past two weeks
  11. KersenBloemNL

    Bobple's Below Average Feedback Thread [Paused]

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/740799/aura-the-souls-true-nature/ I really like your apple rating system, Thanks for doing this!
  12. KersenBloemNL

    What Keeps You Going as a Writer?

    My gf reads my novels and that's genuinely all I need. Seeing her interested in the world and story I'm creating fills me with the drive to continue it
  13. KersenBloemNL

    Free Feedback Thread [Closed - Currently Reading!]

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/740799/aura-the-souls-true-nature/ Read as much as you like. Recently edited the first chapter based on some feedback, really interested in what you think about it, Thank you!
  14. KersenBloemNL

    First Chapter Analysis

    Both of those will actually get answered later down the road hahaha. And yeah, the pacing of chapter 1 is a bit fast, I’m trying to tone that way down now. Thanks for the feedback man!
  15. KersenBloemNL

    Wonderin what pet companion does your mc have

    A little girl with a large umbrella named Magnolia
  16. KersenBloemNL

    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Thanks man! I’ve been wanting to rewrite the beginning anyway, since it’s been a while since I wrote that and my style of writing changed. This is really helpful. Edit: also the cover wasn’t drawn by me, but by a friend of mine
  17. KersenBloemNL

    ?What is your Main-Character doing currently?

    This sounds very cool!
  18. KersenBloemNL

    ?What is your Main-Character doing currently?

    Mc name is Kikaru. He's a white haired pianist travelling around japan with a group of friends to find an object named Infinity. Also probably playing the piano
  19. KersenBloemNL

    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    I'm very interested in seeing your opinion on my novel. It was my first time putting it online, thank you! Infinity of Dreams
  20. KersenBloemNL

    First Chapter Analysis

    Aura Could you perhaps give my novel a look, too? Thanks a lot!
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