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The way I did it was slowly making the mc realise that the world they’re in right now ain’t real life. It slowly started breaking down/showing subtle differences which became less and less subtle until he realised it was a dream. Jumping through time and weird skips such as “mc walks through...

Pretty outlined, but I just go with the flow based on what I think is cool and also what would be most interesting for the characters.

One of my other friends started reading my series, which makes me have 3 consistent readers now :p

Oeh! This might be helpful, I was never gonna do long descriptions anyway, thanks for this! Edit after reading: okay yeah this goes hard, into the research folder it goes

Peep the edit :) also, I have asked around for feedback, most of what you said correlates with what others have said. Later chapters kinda fix the issue (once again, I think). My main two readers don’t really notice that many issues, but I love gathering feedback anyway. (Also, english ain’t my...

Thanks for the feedback, i’ll try to incorporate what you said. I haven’t noticed the formatting problem myself, I should probably look at this stuff on pc too lol. Also didn’t see that I dropped the girl’s name without revealing it first. I didn’t really do long descriptions in the earlier...

I always start out with some of their actions, before revealing their name. Like in chapter 7 of my current novel, where I introduced a new vigilante, but his name only gets revealed by the end of it, throughout the whole chapter I referred to him as "Hooded man" or something like that.

Coming back on this, what’s your policy on asking for feedback after editing?

Man, ever since 2 weeks ago i've been on fire with my current novel lol, finished up the whole plot structure yesterday and am now pumping out the chapters for act 2 hahaha

This is a great thread lol. I have a whopping 4 readers (which I know of) right now, and even that amount makes me happy, I really hope that more people would check out my story some day, when my writing has gotten better, but i'm still improving every step along the way.

Oh wow, what a mess up, I think I fixed it now, but thanks for pointing it out. English isn’t my native language, so I probably just read over it lol. Thanks!

Imagine your fighting someone. But they keep hyping up a character, and never seeminly slowing down. They just get stronger as the fight continues, but they’re also acting a bit weirder, praising that character more and more and more, like some divine god. And then, when you lose sight of them...

Contains implied spoilers for the recent chapters. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.

As a lightning quick gardener and nothing else? Sure, sign me up lmao

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/740799/aura-the-souls-true-nature/ :blob_cookie: english ain’t my first language too, this is the first story i’m set to complete. i’m curious about what you think about my story. You can leave feedback in this thread, I don’t really mind

Shit homie thats 15 more than i’d expect. Wish you luck in your horrendous endeavor.

This song just hits different

You did your feedback fine, imho! No need to worry about the thread not being that active anymore. (Should've read more of my story tho )

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/740799/aura-the-souls-true-nature/ I'm simultaniously scared but also intrigued, also, my name begins with a K, so half of that requirement is met (Don't do that bonus thingy tho)

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/740799-aura-the-souls-true-nature/chapter/740811/ I’m kinda curious now, thank you in advance