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Oh yeah, its just a big-ass info dump. I hope i've written it in a way thats fun to read anyway, I wouldn't add this in as part of a chapter or story though, this would be background reading for those interested. I've always known these things about the corruption/faction anyway but its...

Thank you very much! And yeah, its the universes most dangerous STD! I originally designed it as a horny trap but people didn't care and fell into it anyway, so i've just continued to develop them anyway! Thank you! Looks like i've done what I set out to do. This one feels good for me because I...

Hey everyone, I've been working on a world building document to go along with my fiction, written in the style of a official report published about the faction/affliction. I wanted an official sounding, SCP-esq. feel to it. I don't think I can port it onto scribblehub directly though as its...

Ah thank you! Very kind of you to say! I do adore how my species turned out, here is another QT although she isn't in the storyline just yet.

I have no idea what a Stand is/JoJo other than its an anime but thats a compliment right?

Oh I got loads of art of my characters but its more of an evolving world that I tell stories about, rather than a book that i've converted. This beautiful creature is "Amour" and she doesn't turn up until much later but I just love how this one turned out.

Wonderful, thank you! Introducing too many characters seems to be a weakness of mine as I come up with tons of characters, Elises crew is supposed to be 7 strong although they come in and out of the story and I had more to introduce later as well... I do struggle with that. I thought i'd kept...

Hey all, i'm used to writing adult content and i've had a ton of characters that i've wanted to write about for ages. Its only got two chapters at the moment and whilst i've been writing for a while now, i've not done something more focused, would appreciate feedback, also looking to write about...

I suddenly like you quite a lot now ? - I'm still learning boundaries and whatnot, i'd have just called you a dick earlier if I knew you appreciated forwardness! Sorry for the passive approach, I do need to work on taking stuff easier sometimes. There's no claim here that its not degeneracy, it...

I'd say something interesting in general. My younger sister started a story with a child shooting their mum in the face and I was upset I didn't think of it first, now thats a hook. Doesn't need to be something crazy but you need something to lure people in, give them a compelling reason to get...

Its a guilty pleasure... but I actually like it when the main group overcomes the villain with the power of friendship. Theres something wholesome about your homies having your back and all coming together to kick ass.

There was something about how grey and blobbish you are that triggered my fight or flight reflex. Either that or calling everything degenerate, insisting your comment was required/correct/not already covered and wondering why you rubbed someone the wrong way. Eh, could be either.

And your response was generic and already addressed but again, thanks for coming, appreciate you stopping by.

Don't think that was ever in question but thanks for throwing your two cents in. No amount of Heavy flamer can ever undo what these words put into you, Salamander. And yeah, its very niche, its not the only stuff I write but it is what i'm working on atm.

This sort of statement is what is guiding my rewrite in the first place. The original was written 10+ years ago and it certainly had redeeming moments, but basically it was just sex scene after sex scene for the first 4 chapters and then the story happened. I've stripped out a lot of that in the...

Thats not a bad idea. Only issue i've got is that I already have too many on-going projects! Oh woe is me! I'll give it some thought though. I feel that. I've thought about stripping some stuff out of my writing to increase its appeal but for now i've opted not to do so. Not for this series...

>Barges into thread >Tells everyone they like tall girls in uniform despite it having nothing to do with the question >Refuses to elaborate >Leaves Hah! Nah I get you, writing about stuff you enjoy is obviously more enjoyable. We share that one btw. I'm just pondering over what does more damage...

You get stuck in the middle of the Venn diagram of fans right? You've already got smaller groups to work with because of the nature of the story, you then bisect it further by adding in more variables. Each new "tag" cuts the potential fan base down more.

This feels pretty correct. I've been looking at stats across many websites and the comments/likes i've had seem... above average? in terms of view to comment/like ratio. But the niche nature of the sex scenes (irrespective of the storyline) does feel like a restraint on the stories potential...

Yeah, its an odd one. I know people can be very specific about their wants in a story and straying from that can upset them. I've got a horror/thriller/romance/adult vide going on which is odd combo and it has its own moments of dark comedy in it as well. I think comedy really helps keep things...