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  1. Beta_Krogoth

    Writing Is it necessary to skip writing the boring parts?

    I'm finding a balance between heavy action, smut and quieter character moments, fuck knows if its going well though, feedback as been slim recently, those who have reached out have said they like it. Writing about stuff that doesn't interest you has a habit of showing though.
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    Heavy Weapons Art Thread - Covers and Alien artwork

    Thank you! I had this completed this week by the same artist too! Extreme talent!
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    Heavy Weapons Art Thread - Covers and Alien artwork

    Thank you thank you! It looks fantastic!
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    Heavy Weapons Art Thread - Covers and Alien artwork

    A friend on discord/FA, got a few pieces from her, she's excellent! Glad you both like! I absolutely adore it.
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    Heavy Weapons Art Thread - Covers and Alien artwork

    Edit: Changing the title of the thread, going to use this thread as a showcase for some of my favourite artwork I've bought for Heavy Weapons. I've finally commissioned a new cover for my story after rewriting the first arc, as suggested by my fiancé and i LOVE how it turned out. You won't be...
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    Heavy Weapons - Sweet Venom Characters

    I just got this piece done today and i'm absolutely in love with it. This is an older character that I recently had updated to bring her more in line with her new backstory and... well. Despite her being a villain, I would, thats all i'm saying.
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    Heavy Weapons - Sweet Venom Characters

    Couple of Plasia fans! I need more art of her! Heres a few more: Cherry - Part of a trio of Controllers, Cherry is a hard hitting, no nonsense enforcer, she can take a punch! Bubblegum - The second of the Trio, Bubblegum is hyper, fun and rather intelligent, despite her playful demeanour...
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    Heavy Weapons - Sweet Venom Characters

    Hey everyone, thought i'd showcase some of my favourite artwork i've had commissioned of my characters, none of these were drawn by me but commissioned instead. I've got tons of artwork but a lot of it is NSFW so i won't be showcasing it here. Do enjoy though and let me know if you have a...
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    Does chapter size matter?

    Oh wow, this is quite insightful, I usually do around 4-7k per chapter which seems like waaaaaay too much. I'll have to take it down a few I think.
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    Help with branching character perspectives and tones

    Sounds good, thanks for your time and advice!
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    Help with branching character perspectives and tones

    Oh you've read my stuff? :O Sweet Venom or something else? What you think? And yeah, i'm not going to repeat any of the same content, i'm just worried about tone mixing but I think i can get it right! Just need to get the words down first methinks!
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    Help with branching character perspectives and tones

    Did you mean to reply to this thread? I was talking more about pacing rather than the characters themselves.
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    Help with branching character perspectives and tones

    We've just finished a big action filled finale so I was going to give the cast a little break but I want to keep pace with the other characters that are doing their own thing, i'll have a play and see if I can get it to flow right.
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    What's you guys take on this

    In this instance - yes - feral refers to characters with animal bodies but human or greater intelligence as stated by OP. If you're just looking at porn tags - Feral refers to animal bodys only and does not refer to their intelligence, I wouldn't recommend googling it, definitely don't bing it...
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    What's you guys take on this

    I like anthro characters but I can't stand feral body types even when the character is question is sapient. For me, the reason I like anthro characters is because of the human element within them. The more you stray from the human morph and structure, the more bestial it becomes. I essentially...
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    Help with branching character perspectives and tones

    Hey everyone, just looking for some advice on branching character perspectives, my story Sweet Venom has always featured multiple character perspectives and as I reach the end of the first arc i've hit a bit of a stumbling block, the first arc had roughly the same tone for everyones perspectives...
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    Completed the first arc of my rewritten adult sci-fi story - Looking for feedback

    Hey everyone, i've very recently finished the first arc of my story, it was a rewrite of a story I wrote years ago that started off as a porn story but rapidly developed into something better, trouble was I could never recommend the beginning to anyone due to it just being smut... The rewrite...
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    Fuel for writing

    Music works wonders for me. I'll play character theme tunes and scene music as i'm writing and listening to new music often generate new ideas and scenes in my head.
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    Tips For Writing In 1st Person?

    I very recently wrote a short story from 1st person and it was my first time too, although the second half is just pure smut, the first half was really fun to write and features an unrelentingly sassy CEO type lady. Being able to directly stream a characters thoughts is really fun if the...
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    World building feedback - Sci-fi Faction report (Evil, dark, corruption)

    I... think I might already have the worldbuilder disease! I will refine the tables at the end though into something workable, I like the way they read and present. Thank you for your input though, much appreciated.
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