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    I made this with AI today, COME RATE IT

    I like the first two the most. The second one would work even as a cover, in my opinion.
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    Recommendations Horror recommendation

    Hi! I am looking for some horror books to satisfy that part of me that is hungry for chills down my spine, nightmares, and faster heartbeats. I don't care if it is classic horror, erotica horror, or whatever. It's a bonus if it's about ghosts, demonic possessions, evil entities, and so on, and...
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    Is "slow life" becoming a trend?

    I think that slice of life is just relaxing, and many people are searching for something to help them calm down and forget a bit about what is stressing them. While some prefer to go on a vacation somewhere (or anything, for that matter), others don't find the same pleasure in doing so or lack...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Drinking a cup of tea :blob_sir:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Discard one card at random, without question.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I would turn back home.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Indeedngly
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    Safety

    Carefinallingly.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    is the fifth letter of the alphabet.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    The title of the thread works as a writing prompt as well.:blob_hide:
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    :blob_cookie:

    :blob_cookie:
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    What is your biggest fear?

    Let the door and the lights from your room open and after closing the lights in the rest of the house, run to the light. I found it very helpful :blob_okay:.
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    What is your biggest fear?

    Night butterflies and cockroaches. I behave like a lunatic if I see one of those insects :blob_sweat:. Or many of them :sweating_profusely:. Or many of them in the same place :blob_ghost:.
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    Looking for some feedback on my Viking story with a unusual twist :)

    Yes (I checked). In my opinion, it looks better now, and it's easier to read :blob_highfive:. As a side note, maybe this could help you out: In short, a semicolon is used to add two independent but closely related clauses, while a period indicates the end of a sentence (and in the case of...
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    Looking for some feedback on my Viking story with a unusual twist :)

    You're welcome! Hope I was of help. Edit: Also, if you don't understand something I said in my first reply, don't hesitate to message me. I would gladly give you an additional explanation.
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    Looking for some feedback on my Viking story with a unusual twist :)

    In my opinion, yes. The starting idea is good and quite captivating, in my perspective, and the way you handle the descriptions, the characters, the flow of action, and other relevant aspects that make me, as a reader, want to read your book is impressive. At least I like it. And I see the...
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    Looking for some feedback on my Viking story with a unusual twist :)

    It depends. I usually don't like rating a book while taking everything into consideration. After all, each writer has their own writing style and idea about how much she or he should reveal about worldbuilding from the start. So, having in mind what I just said, I would say it like this: Based...
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    You're welcome! It was my pleasure!:blob_gift:

    You're welcome! It was my pleasure!:blob_gift:
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    Looking for some feedback on my Viking story with a unusual twist :)

    Hi! I will tell you my opinion, splitting it into two: technicalities (grammar, phrasing, and so on) and from a reader's point of view (mixed with some knowledge as a writer). However, I want to mention that English is my second language, so keep that in mind. I also want to mention that I've...
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    First chapter, please read and give opinion.

    No problem! It was my pleasure. Happy I could help! I understood what you wanted to say, but for me, at least, it took two times to read the sentence to understand it properly. Although I didn't know that the word "for" used in this manner could make a sentence clunky :blob_pat_sad: (I use it...
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