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    Need some feedback.

    Hi! So, this is the first time I've given a shot to LitRPG. I am not a fan of this genre but what you said made me want to try it at least. I found these fears to be common after some time when you haven't written anymore and spent more time editing (or just didn't have the time to write, so...
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    My lack of patience when I should be patient :blob_facepalm: :blob_no:. Perhaps.

    My lack of patience when I should be patient :blob_facepalm: :blob_no:. Perhaps.
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    :blob_pat_sad:

    :blob_pat_sad:
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    :sweating_profusely: :blob_pat_sad:

    :sweating_profusely: :blob_pat_sad:
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    Rawr :blob_nom:

    Rawr :blob_nom:
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    Resource for Kingdom Building

    I read books in the historical and archaeological fields on these matters. If you want, I can list some books that helped me with a lot of information about many areas of life during that period.
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    @Cipiteca396 Not all of them. I made sure mine was decaffeinated.

    @Cipiteca396 Not all of them. I made sure mine was decaffeinated.
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    Awww, so cute :blob_aww:! My grandmother used to nudge me every night to brush my teeth when I...

    Awww, so cute :blob_aww:! My grandmother used to nudge me every night to brush my teeth when I was little. I hated it back then, but did it every time and left the bathroom giggling.
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    Now, tea is supposed to soothe me before sleep. But I keep staring at my damn monitor without...

    Now, tea is supposed to soothe me before sleep. But I keep staring at my damn monitor without the slightest wish to sleep, thinking about a book I once read. Me with my damn dirty mind.
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    @Aaqil Then I pat myself for mistaking the mistaking :blob_pat_sad:.

    @Aaqil Then I pat myself for mistaking the mistaking :blob_pat_sad:.
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    Oh :blob_sweat:. I mistook it for me patting myself... Oh well, it's never too late to learn...

    Oh :blob_sweat:. I mistook it for me patting myself... Oh well, it's never too late to learn something new :blob_cookie:.
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    Simple 500 word First Chapter. Looking for Feed back

    In my opinion, the best way to write such a character is to explain the reasons for his actions and to say what else he is doing. Because, even though he is calm and composed, he does something. He moves his head to the side, he narrows his eyes, he tightens his lips, you name it. Examples...
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    How do I describe this?

    His big, coarse hands touched the wooden table. His palms and fingers were covered in many calluses due to the hard work in the fields, making him seem stolid and unapproachable. Maybe.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    The plot is interesting.
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    How To Write Compelling Shit

    My point precisely.
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    Simple 500 word First Chapter. Looking for Feed back

    Hi! I will tell you my opinion, splitting it into two: technicalities (grammar, phrasing, and so on) and from a reader's point of view (mixed with some knowledge as a writer). However, I want to mention that English is my second language, so keep that in mind. I also want to mention that I've...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Oh :blob_sweat:. Which anime?
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Can't wait for my ? to be ready.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Ich denke, dass man damit vorsichtig sein sollte. Manchmal ist es schwer zu wissen, wann man gut und wann man schlecht zu sein. (Sorry if my deutsch is lacking. I haven't used it in a while.)
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    Recommendations Horror recommendation

    Thank you! I stumbled upon Katalepsis before and added it to my reading list. I found it to be interesting (from the synopsis) :blob_aww:. And thank you for the other two as well! I don't mind manga. :blob_uwu: Dungeon Defense seems to be more on my liking (based on the synopsis). Thank you! I...
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