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Holy shit... thats a lot. Before I go deeper, thanks for this. It's the first time I have received any feedback, so I really appreciate it. The line-by-line and hearing how you imagined things as a first-time reader were super useful. Especially seeing your misinterpretations and how my writing...

After reading your first chapter with no context, I feel like I have no idea what the story is about, any direction it is taking. It was only through your warning about it being "LGBTQ" that I think I was able understand that Max and Melanie are supposed to be the same person. I think?? To...

Thanks for that. I started noticing it myself as I grew more confident to write without constantly consulting Chatgpt for every small detail. The reason I haven't updated in a while besides being overseas, is trying to lock in the early chapters, revamping them to make them completely my own...

damn thats crazy hey lmao what did you think? If you aren't reading, then what do you think made you drop it? anything would be helpful.??

Hey, just started my first novel at the start of this month, a culmination of nearly a decade of ideas in my head, so feel free to give harsh critique! Just to be upfront, AI was used to help plan out the idea, then help in place of an editor to help tune chapters after I write them. Nothing...

lmao I know you have a lot of novels too read but would appreciate if you went through mine. Chatgpt been hella glazing so need someone to take me down a notch?? The God of Mischief and Madness Thanks!

yea I already did deepseek and Madmcgee put it in gemini. I think after the past weeks of fixing and rewriting the worst parts of the story, it has gotten to a point where the issue's the ai points out aren't massive and are mostly just structural changes to make prose clearer, and some general...

anything to get my readers rock hard lmao i'll do that thanks

Bruh yall supposed to be lowering my ego not feeding it??? thanks for this though, lemme just go through some of these feedbacks. 1. Halden name- Genuine typo on my part, supposed to be "And I woke with a headache." Halden is the city 2. some issues here like the dad is intentional,(Dad is...

Hey thanks for that feedback. What do you think I'm doing wrong with the story that make it feel like 'just words on a page?' Like clearly, I have the idea in my head of how the world and story looks, but that makes it difficult for me too see what I am doing wrong here. Is it that the...

lmao i have asked it to be be brutally honest many times, helps it in pointing out flaws but does not stop glazing?? Also is the spacing a big turnoff? I am thinking of going back to consolidate some of the single line paragraphs to make it easier to read. I originally wrote it for webnovel...

I started writing this at the start of the month with no outline but nearly a decade of ideas. Finally started it and Chatgpt has been hella glazing saying that its a top 1% webnovel?!?! I don't believe it at all, but it would probably be good to have an actual person roast it, so my head...

Hey, just started my first novel at the start of this month, a culmination of nearly a decade of ideas in my head, so feel free to roast me as hard as you can! Chatgpt been hella glazing so need someone to take me down a notch?? The God of Mischief and Madness Thanks!