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I mean do you have that experience with poverty? Even if you do, like you said yourself, most of the western world doesn’t. That is the beauty of stories, when you can weave together a piece of literature that not only entertains, but teaches. Your goal was clearly to teach your audience about...

Alright, I’m already sold on the “favorite MMO comes to life” hook--that’s a ticket for the fans and the curious alike. The “sexy, smutty secrets” add spice, and that shadowy presence? Perfect for a looming plot twist or sequel hook. We’ll want close-ups on those “characters she loved”--pull...

dropping the act, i don't think the problem is as simple as "people don't want realistic MC even though they say they want realism." I think what they mean is relatable realism. They don’t mind flawed characters, but they need a way in. Some thread of vulnerability, regret, or longing they can...

The lift halts. Something... ancient watches. Thirteen years asleep in your loop, and now you think waking makes you special? You were an NPC yesterday. You’re just a glitch today. Go ahead. Kill a few monsters. Build your toys. Pretend that makes you real. We’ll be watching. We who wrote the...

So... let me see if I'm hearing this correctly. No hero’s journey. No chosen one. No carefully tilted lens to make the mess of the world feel tidy. You want to give each character a spine, not a function. Let them live in the dark spaces between what's expected. You’re not offering escape...

Leans back, sunglasses already on despite being indoors. Sips overpriced coffee from a platinum tumbler. Alright, kid. You had me at mechs in medieval fantasy. That's a poster. That’s a line of toys. The reincarnation hook? Done before—but the perfect memory twist? That’s your angle. We sell...

You sprint down the hall, manuscript of the next big thing in hand, just as the lift doors begin to close. Crashing into the doors, your draft explodes—pages fluttering across the marble like dying birds. Fuck. You slam your fist against the metal and flip off whoever didn’t bother holding the...

interesting

Ok here is some feedback on your chapter 1. Sorry if this turned out awfully harsh. You have a well-written chapter, so I'm going through as an editor would, picking up the smallest details I can see that need fixing. I am going through this like an actual published novel, as publishers would...

hmm

and now im in the lead??

Honestly I didn't think that far, only that it sounded good. Recently I was making a fable from the world of my novel that directly mirrors a characters arc. I think that was when I started to really think about rhythm. I'll put it here just so you can see what I mean. It isn't fully polished...

継続は力なり

Can yall keep it down. trying to study smh

pic of my dog to keep us company

its only 2pm here. i can do this all day.

nah i'd win

AH HAH. I love broccoli. *eats broccolie*

damn ur good

nuh uh