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    Misheard Music Lyric

    I thought Paparazzi was saying Bubble Roxie. Same singer too! She needs to enunciate.
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    Song Writing!

    I used the first two verses of this, fiddled with the rest, and called it a day.
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    Song Writing!

    Unless people post something quick, I'll use what I got, which is basically altered from an AI suggest. But I'd really prefer something made by real people. I'd also like a real tune. Backstory: Our hero (who takes the stage name Momo) is an amateur artist who joins a design company. One thing...
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    I'll have to look at that sentence. Ah, it's a flashback from another book. I think it was originally changed from third person to first, so there's some clunkiness going on. Yeah, exposition... Aaaagh, I always do that. I think what happens is I'm in the middle of a thought, and then life...
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    Need some help with a town name.

    Dog Lily (drop Town from the name, as most towns don't have it). Lilies are often poisonous to dogs. Go with that theme when fleshing out your town.
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Okay, I already know why you would stop reading Oracle of Tao (it's incredibly long, and ranty in places), so try this one out. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/638181/town-of-winter/
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    Where did the love go?

    Yes, that. Without the hand stabbing incident.
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    Darkest Chapter (Comedy Optional)

    :s_wink: ...No, because she left. She goes on to move to a new apartment where they turn out to be in a BDSM femdom circle, and her job promotes her from design artist to fashion company, to the same company making clothes for music and movie industry, to working for makeup and costumes for...
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    Where did the love go?

    As a writer, the best advice you can take is from business owners. Specifically conservative business owners. I say this not because conservatives are any better than liberals, but that pandering (especially to popular token groups) is a real menace to liberals. Conservatives understand that...
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    Darkest Chapter (Comedy Optional)

    Dude! I usually avoid having things happen to little girls.
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    Darkest Chapter (Comedy Optional)

    What is the darkest (or darkest comedy) chapter you've written so far? My personal record is making a McDonald's stand-in serve zombie meat. When someone balks, they're like "You're right, that won't do as part of our regular menu, it might contaminate the other stuff. Let's make it a special!"...
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    Using HISTORY in fiction: (The Lounge Podcast)

    Well, for my story I researched anime history (along with events from 1982 to 2011). It was somewhat fascinating to try to figure out when certain episodes did or didn't air (I wanted to know if characters would be watching a show or not). Placing pop culture is difficult but rewarding.
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    Torture Anime

    Oh no you didn't! Oh course, the other way to torture someone is subject them to sappy AF anime. Angel Beats, Kanon, and Wolf Children are good places to start there.
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    Torture Anime

    Okay, this is what I came up with (the setting goes from about 1982 to 2011, in an alternative reality with a COVID-like event starting in 2004). So Madoka is the latest magical girl show. I kinda laughed to myself at her torturer figuring this was just some other cutesy anime, and walking off...
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    Torture Anime

    That was the lackluster part. I needed sorta known bad ones. Although I've heard of Gundress and Psychic Wars. Wait, Berserk? Berserk cannot be on a bad list, even if poorly done! Garzey's Wing, Skelter Haven, Wounded Man, Ex-ARM, and Psychic Wars shows up on both. This means they are...
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    Torture Anime

    Okay, so one of my characters is stuck in prison, and they (begrudgingly) convince the warden to let them watch anime or read manga. But they basically are like "See if I don't pick shows that you will hate!" So they are picking a list of terrible anime. And so now I need that list, please...
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    Looking for Artist Someone to Design my Title Voluntarily

    So, I guess I don't understand. Is that already your title, and you want a redesign? Or you want soneone to think up a name for it? (Reads last post) Ah. Btw, if you want the same text effect to a new picture, simply color selection on GIMP (adjust your threshold for nearby color shades, copy...
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    What are the weirdest combination of genre readers that mix surprisingly well?

    On Webtoons, I've seen at least two of them that appear to be a mashup of psycho thriller and romance. You basically have to play up the yandere angle to have it work, though.
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    Anyone on here doing NaNoWriMo this year?

    I probably managed the goal of about one chapter a day for a month when I was writing one of my novels. I hate the 50,000 word limit though. Managed about 80,000 words for that book. Hell, at 156 pages so far with my current, I'm already at nearly 80,000 words. I find word count challenges to...
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    I cut my hair

    Use it to create clones of yourself.
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