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? Ok? My bad. I’m not offended, just confused. I’m new to forums, I didn’t take this post seriously to be honest. I don’t know anyone here, what else was I supposed to say when sharing my random ass novel cover? I don’t think my stuff is good enough to brag about so I just wrote a random intro...

Eh? Well I do have a whole story planned out, even on my Instagram too. My followers on there know that shiz. I was just saying I felt demotivated to post these days because the Instagram algorithm changed again and made things suck. Also the whole mafia leader or lord of something thing sounds...

??? What Italian? He's brown bro. Like south Asian. I'm honestly confused what y'all talking about. Also there's no mafia involvement, it's like a mystery story set in the victorian times, except in Japan. Also it’s fantasy-ish so almost everyone in the country has white hair. Think of like the...

Bang as in shoot, with revolver, possibly lol. He doesn't even have a sister lmao (I honestly don't know house of dragon so idk lol) Nah not both, he plays none, or maybe one one day (no sisters. Hell nah to that) ?✨

My art is flopping on Instagram so I've kinda given up for now lol. I'll just write instead ¯\_(　´∀｀)_/¯✨✨ I got uni to worry about anyway Also ignore my rambling. Thanks for stopping by to stare at the MC dude

I'm ready to get roasted ?✨ My novel is a mystery set in a steampunkish setting, except it's Japan, and no one is actually human. Take from that what you will. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/

I was wondering if my first chapter was any good, since it’s my first shot at a mystery. And also, on thread please! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/

Haha sorryyy ᕕ( ᐕ )ᕗ✨✨ lol. If I wrote them as the love interest it'd end in complete tragedy cuz of the Isekai tag lol.

Thank you! I'm really happy you like the writing style! Also, thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate you taking the time to write it! And I'm honestly really happy you liked what I wrote! Btw, Kai is unfortunately not the MC's love interest tho, just best friend! The love interest...

That's just because one of the characters are gay. It won't be happening for, I dunno, 60 chapters into the future? The story doesn't have any romance focus at all.

Do you mind taking a look at mine? I've only got two chapters rn, but I just want to see if they are good enough to not warrant another complete rewrite. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/744621/fates-redacted/

Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to do this! I agree with most of your points, and will take a look at it again to see what I can polish up! I really do need to work on a proper writing schedule tho lol. I'm just trying not to fail math rn. No, but maybe I'll...

No one else has bothered to look at it yet lol. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Heyyy, if anyone is available to give some constructive criticism or leave a review on my book that'd be great! Before I drown in the seas of writers block lol. I'm honestly loosing motivation by the minute (cuz of school), maybe even criticism can bring it back? Possibly? Anyways, my story is...

Thank you for the feedback! Your criticisms actually make a lot of sense. I was struggling with the dialogue flow from the get go, so your thoughts about it helped a bit! Though I probably need to get more experience with writing dialogue because I feel that it's my biggest weakness right now...

Mind taking a look at mine? I just uploaded it here after rewriting and polishing it up a bit. Be as harsh as you want! I definitely need the criticism lol https://www.scribblehub.com/series/744621/fates-redacted/

Hi! I'm new to SH and was wondering if you could give me some feedback on my novel? I've only got 2 chapters right now tho, hope that isn't a problem. You can just comment the review if you'd like. I'd really appreciate it if you'd give it a read over...

Thank you for the honest feedback! I agree with your points, because I honestly do struggle with making the chapter short and concise, it just keeps getting longer and more dragged out than it needs to be. I'm not exactly sure how to fix the issue, but I have done some editing to the current...

Oh whoops! Does it work now? https://docs.google.com/file/d/1FLo_m5AQdHp4DuC8Gkchf_NUC_ovQm2P/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=msword

Hmm…Yeah, you have some good points. Maybe I sacrificed too much of the characterization for the world building. Umm… I have a previous draft of the chapter. Is it okay if I ask for you to look at it a bit? I’m kinda worried now that I replaced the old chapter for a worse version. Sorry if I’m...