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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Ohhh best of luck to you, humble cat! May the small victories snowball into a final win!
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    Wassup I'm back from the back roomsʕ·̀ω·́ʔ✧ Wow it's been forever, how's everything going guys?

    Wassup I'm back from the back roomsʕ·̀ω·́ʔ✧ Wow it's been forever, how's everything going guys?
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Lol i stand corrected 1303 nya-nya then :3
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    1302 nya
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Dang that's a cool dishwasher
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    (Art dump) Vanished for 2 years and came back with art!

    Heya everybody! I dipped from existence for like two years but I'm back! Probably nobody remembers me lol, but yea, just wanted to share some concept/character art I made of my newest novel project! MC: MC and his frenemy coworker: The main trio (scene from chapter 3): Their dynamic (just...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Perhaps I will✨
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Maybe I’ll win accidentally lol
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    I’ve got a draft in the works but it would be fun to get a sincere bs review! Enjoy! Whenever you have time ofc https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ycwvr77V6yYE8MkgsrAFO2ELBc-mpKmAggRc7g9vUNk/edit?usp=drivesdk
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    I’m ready for the roasting! Literally disembowel it, I’ll happily take the criticism! I’ve got this draft in the works, it’s 9 chapters long so far and the chapters are average 2.5k- 4k (longest is the first chapter at 6k, I know it’s bad lol)...
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    Negative Feedback Thread

    Rip at it ?✨ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/
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    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Open until further notice.

    Hi, I reworked the synopsis a bit. I wonder if this is a bit better. Synopsis: To the pawn lead on a trail of blood, mystery was an unfair game. Being placed in the body of a supposed murderer, moments after the act, is not a typical situation. And to prove one's innocence after the fact isn't...
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    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Open until further notice.

    Thank you for the feedback! I really do need to work on the synopsis so I’ll see what I can do!
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    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Open until further notice.

    Mind giving mine some feedback? I'm not the best at selling my story with the synopsis to be honest. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/
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    Free Feedback Thread [Closed - Currently Reading!]

    Hi! Thanks for hosting! I'd like some feedback and criticisms as well, I can definitely benefit from both! You can read up to chapter 4 if you feel like it! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    I offer mine as tribute https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/
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    Missing Nin of SH

    Para the untouchable has appeared! ✨ *cue dramatic smoke bomb* (Your imagination is top notch fr)
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    ? Hoard of the Prince ?

    What's the horde? Is it food? Can I eat it :blob_cookie:
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