Heya everybody! I dipped from existence for like two years but I'm back! Probably nobody remembers me lol, but yea, just wanted to share some concept/character art I made of my newest novel project!
MC:
MC and his frenemy coworker:
The main trio (scene from chapter 3):
Their dynamic (just...
I’ve got a draft in the works but it would be fun to get a sincere bs review! Enjoy! Whenever you have time ofc
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ycwvr77V6yYE8MkgsrAFO2ELBc-mpKmAggRc7g9vUNk/edit?usp=drivesdk
I’m ready for the roasting! Literally disembowel it, I’ll happily take the criticism! I’ve got this draft in the works, it’s 9 chapters long so far and the chapters are average 2.5k- 4k (longest is the first chapter at 6k, I know it’s bad lol)...
Hi, I reworked the synopsis a bit. I wonder if this is a bit better.
Synopsis:
To the pawn lead on a trail of blood, mystery was an unfair game. Being placed in the body of a supposed murderer, moments after the act, is not a typical situation. And to prove one's innocence after the fact isn't...
Mind giving mine some feedback? I'm not the best at selling my story with the synopsis to be honest.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912210/the-pawns-game-theatre-of-death/
Hi! Thanks for hosting! I'd like some feedback and criticisms as well, I can definitely benefit from both! You can read up to chapter 4 if you feel like it!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/858514/scripted-fate/