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    Was about to write get well soon, then I read it was about a broken sock....

    Was about to write get well soon, then I read it was about a broken sock....
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    Favorite Character Archetypes

    Definitely the "Merlin" and all of his avatars (Gandalf, Dumbledore, Moiraine). The other is of course the Byronic Hero.
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    Contest Theme's Suggestions

    Fantastic Women Athletes Stories/Novellas about women in sport. Writing about sacrifices they make and hurdles that they face as they compete to be the best. Or even just describe a match they play! Up to you. Any sport is good. Can be sports from this world, or medieval times, and even...
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    Need feedback for my story?

    Dawg, ... ummm, it's just not a story for me. Again, this is just my perspective. Here is where I come from: I am a bit of a traditionalist, so I like a flowing narrative and more traditional use of styling than say in LitRPGs or translations. Firstly, I think your introductory chapter flits...
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    I had another thought while scrolling on SH. Again!

    Only if it is inside the predictable domain. AFAI remember, predictability breaks down after reynolds numbers become a certain value in fluids at least. This is fair point. This i precisely what the theory is about. But, it also does say that at certain situations the variations in system given...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    merde!
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    I had another thought while scrolling on SH. Again!

    Okay, I don't know whether you want to dive into the real scientific basis or not, but here it goes - Chaos Theory says that a system becomes unpredictable beyond a certain level of complexity. The most famous is the "Three-Body Problem", and the "Double Pendulums". Literally everything else...
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    When writing off the bad ends of bad guys, to what level of violence and gores are readers willing to tolerate?

    It is almost always advised to not have to not have protagonists do terrible things, no matter how 'rogue-like' the characters are. It's a simple matter of the moral compass of the reader, as we want to keep a separation of the deeds of evil. Almost every reader coming here would have seen...
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    Shameless chapter promo, for Edgar Crow. Chapter 10: Rescue. https://bit.ly/3vBF1r4

    Shameless chapter promo, for Edgar Crow. Chapter 10: Rescue. https://bit.ly/3vBF1r4
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    Should have named the Chapter Ode to Midnight, honestly.

    Should have named the Chapter Ode to Midnight, honestly.
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    Mid-Night Fever. New chapter! https://bit.ly/3oEwpNo

    Mid-Night Fever. New chapter! https://bit.ly/3oEwpNo
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    This is my energy at the end of the day

    This is my energy at the end of the day
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    My Stories are the Best Thing Since Sliced Bread

    Salieri needs no marketing. :blob_hide: I'm just here to say that Pita bread is the greatest invention since bread. Also, welcome to SH!
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    Kentaro Miura, mangaka of Berserk, has passed away in May 6 at age 54

    One of the most iconic and greatest storytellers and manga artists of all time. Rest in Peace.
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    A character card for writing

    Well, even if the character never fights they always sit somewhere! And, yes their eye will reveal a bit about their tastes. It is just a reminder that we need to flesh them out a bit.
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    Writing A co-author, but I don't care

    Sure. But @Agentt must come up with the characters. The Main characters at least. Create a large array for them.
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    Writing A co-author, but I don't care

    I would love to jump in, but I'm already struggling with time. :( Perhaps, you could make an anthology of stories by different authors with the same characters? Hear me out. You set up the characters - say Robin Hood and his band, and in the first anthology, there are five authors coming up...
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