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Ahh, yes, the good ol' meat bun economy. Definitely beat the Turnip economics. depends on how normal people live day to day in this world. Is it a decent life, considering they are peasants? Are they struggling even to get the basics? Using the base ten system is usually best for anything...

I prefer the traditional novel format. However, I do most of my reading on a mobile device now, so I prefer no more than 2-4 sentences, then a space for eye relief. If there is one thing on a phone I hate, it is being presented a wall of text. Dialogue follows the same thing. If the person is...

Having a cat allows for random interludes of things being knocked off tables, a cat stuck on the curtains, or other devices you can use to segue into your next scene. Or get a duck, for the waddles.

Time is such a weird thing... rather, the passage of time Sometimes I feel I have been waiting thirty minutes for something, and barely a minute has passed. Other times, I think it's been five minutes, it's actually been four hours.

it would be beautiful!

... your tags will tell your readers what to expect. If you want to explore something your tags don't explain, you can make an Author's Note saying what you plan to do and asking if that would bother anyone. I just checked your tags. I am assuming this is some kind of relationship you want to...

Sounds... pretty boring TBH... Like OPM would be if there wasn't other stuff happening. The fighting shouldn't even be the focus of this story, because he is so strong.

I can see grass again... I have the urge to eat it... no no no this duck form...it has gone too far...

Hahaha Yeah, from my perspective, I thought it was some teenage squire or something sneaking up on the dude with a hammer and clobbering him with it. At least until you said it was the dwarf king.

I don't feel there are really any stakes here at all... Dude snuck up behind him and wacked him on the head, then finished him off. There is no sense of tension, but as you mentioned, that could be because this is just the climax of the fight. I tossed one of my battles I wrote in the...

LOL Hardly the only one. Several have a decade or two on me =)

Yeah You will be fine. I consider myself fairly light for smut for a smut author. I have 18 R-18 chapters out of nearly 160, and most of them are fairly short scenes, some even just depictions of foreplay/nudity. Some are full chapter lengths, but that isn't the norm, as I am more focused on...