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I played with your scene a bit; not sure whether the fiends and the bandits were supposed to be the same thing. I don't like the champion's dialogue at all, but I left it in because it might make sense in your story. Also, I assumed you meant crouching behind a shield, not just raising an arm...

Sounds fine to me. It isn't too verbose, so your readers should be able to retain most of it without you having to repeat it later.

so... you are saying you are less humane and have a god complex?

Want a spicier one? Look at the Adult Visual Novel side. I would suggest Once In A Lifetime (complete) or Eternum (ongoing). Same creator. These AVNs/games are extremely well-written, especially considering they fall into the Eroge genre. They both have excellent world-building, character...

Heh, let's play this silly game. Is she a subbie goth, dommie goth, switchy goth? Let's say she is a switch, just so you get two/three things for the price of one. If she is tied, choked, being dommed, whatever, she produces milk for the next 24-72 hrs that has rejuvenating qualities and...

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How to attract readers on SH | Scribble Hub Forum Linked above is a guide for some more advice. Take it or leave it, it isn't a holy bible of getting readers or anything, just some helpful tips.

Well, you could try my work, The Deity Entertainment Network. It does have smut, but it is labelled, and if any significant story happens during those scenes other than some relationship-building, I usually include a summary at the bottom. It isn't the focus of my story at all; usually, only...

yeah... I mix sci-fi and fantasy all the time in my fanfics... this one is difficult to envision. I could probably manage to put something together, but I would need to research all 3 since I am not super familiar with the complete lore of HP other than the first few movies and some fanfics I...

Honestly, this is probably the most obvious answer. When you're actually typing, not 'hunt and peck' typing, switching to a keyboard command sucks... I'd rather just use something else. I still think AI uses them way more than people ever have. /shrug

So I just woke up from a nap and had a lucid dream, where I owned a company that made canvas canopies and how-to videos for DIY canopies for your yard. The last part of the dream was making an apology video because I used Turkish canvas instead of fabric from the textile plant down the road...

One day at university, during a chemistry exam, I had to write a 1000-word essay on acid. Unfortunately, my pen turned into a Gorilla and the floor melted.

so something like this would drive you nuts? "Do you think this is a good idea? We won't have any idea what we will be facing until they are on top of us." Lucy asked. The pair of them stood outside their mechs near the cave where they fought the Jenner and Panther. "It is either genius or...

I use " " John said/replied/whatever, sometimes adding some action as well. If there are only two talking for more than a couple of exchanges, I will identify them both first, then allow their different speech patterns do the rest of the work for me. I frequently will add actions at the end...

hahah I can assure you I did not do that. Your cat offered me the information free of charge