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  1. Lloyd

    The secret to a good power(magic) system.

    This is one of the worst takes I've seen from you. If the power system is bonk, then the writer is retarded and can't come up with a good story either. Just look at a story like Naruto, that gets worse as the power system becomes more convoluted and unbalanced. A story is an interconnected web...
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    Death battle tournament anonce.

    Whoever comes up with the best hax ability wins.
  3. Lloyd

    Writing What do high school girls do when they hangout (out of school)

    Heroine in a bathroom stall sometimes in school too
  4. Lloyd

    How harsh are you on your main characters?

    Make them suffer.
  5. Lloyd

    [Writing advices] Upgrades for Power Source?

    Just do like Minecraft. Wood -> coal -> magma
  6. Lloyd

    Are prophecies something that destroy history?

    Prophecies in the context of novels are usually a literary device ment to confer divinity onto someone. This trope originates from Jesus fulfilling the prophecies of the old testament which at the time and today many people took as proof of him being God.
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    "Mob" MC NOT screwing with the supposed plotline

    I don't think most fanfic authors can resist inserting themselves into the story.
  8. Lloyd

    Writing [Tutorial] Fixing WRITER'S BLOCK

    Instructions unclear, I got my dick stuck in a ceiling fan. ?
  9. Lloyd

    ...Long live our people, united and free~

    Is there a fascist version?
  10. Lloyd

    Video games that you prefer watching people playing than playing them yourself

    Dwarf Fortress is always way more interesting to listen to people tell stories about than it is to actually play.
  11. Lloyd

    Yes! Yes! Yes! YES!!!

    Sour or sweet?
  12. Lloyd

    I always do weak to strong. OP MC is boring to me ?

    I always do weak to strong. OP MC is boring to me ?
  13. Lloyd

    Yes! Yes! Yes! YES!!!

    Looks like elden ring but with dinosaurs.
  14. Lloyd

    I wonder if it is a good enough start or if I should workshop it some more.

    I wonder if it is a good enough start or if I should workshop it some more.
  15. Lloyd

    I concealed myself inside the forest brush just in time. Had the stars been out that night, I...

    I concealed myself inside the forest brush just in time. Had the stars been out that night, I would be dead. All around me, everything went silent. I held my breath for the longest minute of my life.
  16. Lloyd

    "No matter how strong you feel or how clever you think you are, you ain't doing shit against...

    "No matter how strong you feel or how clever you think you are, you ain't doing shit against what's out there. It's not for you. You aren't a part of that world," My father's words echoed through my mind, as a bloody sword struck the ground, inches from my face.
  17. Lloyd

    ???Sneak Peak?️?️?️ ~~New novel coming soon?!?~~

    ???Sneak Peak?️?️?️ ~~New novel coming soon?!?~~
  18. Lloyd

    Better?

    Better?
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