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What most people think of as taste is actually smell. You can really only taste a few flavors (salty, sweet, bitter, sour, and umami). So shit probably just tastes sour or bitter I would guess. :unsure:

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1. Technical Proficiency is fine, if a bit simplistic. The only issue I have is that the chapters are way too short. 2. The story just doesn't have enough going on. It feels like a first draft with how little there is here. You have the beginnings of an interesting story, but what even is...

I noticed your second chapter looks a lot better as far as technical mistakes go. You improve the more you read and write.

There is also a tense issue I forgot to fix. It should be "couldn't go back in time", instead of "can't go back in time."

Okay starting a novel off like this is absolutely unacceptable. Two sentences starting with "I've" right at the start. Are you fucking kidding me? This is basic shit. Don't repeat words in the next sentence it looks retarded. I'll get around to the real review later but that is my roast. No...

1. Technical Proficiency is definitely your weakest area. I'd assume you aren't a native English speaker from all the basic mistakes. Definitely run your stuff through grammarly or another app before you post it. 2. The story content is okay. It's a classic isekai start that gets straight to the...

Okay then.

I am once again for the first time offering free reviews of your novels. All I ask in return is that your writing isn't complete garbage or smut. I prefer to read fantasy or sci-fi, and if you give me anything else I'll probably forget about and not read it. I will be reviewing your novel in...

I guess that explains why blue exorcist shit the bed.

My favorite thing about nature is hunting it with a 50 Caliber anti-material rifle.

Swag

They deleted their account dude.

Weird start makes it seem like he's going to fuck the boar.

Yeah that's why I picked dolphin.

This story is like the definition of slop someone shit out their ass.

Dolphin

Weak to strong every day of the week.