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The Elarian Chronicles Duskfall: Chapter 2.3 Just dropped Check it out HERE

Alrighty. The polling is officially CLOSED. The total tally for each (across all platforms and polling) is: Dani: 1 (SH Forum) + 2 (Discord DM's) + 14 (In-Person) = 17 Lance: 2 (SH Forum) +1 (Discord DM's) + 2 (Text Message) + 9 (In-Person) = 14 Since this poll was (literally) back and forth...

They're people. All of them. Yes, even the villains. Some were even inspired by my friends and other people that I know. So I can't really view them as anything else.

In-Person Vote Results [Requested to be Anonymous - Tallied over the poll's duration] +14 Dani +9 Lance The poll closes fully this afternoon, so there is still time for anyone who wants to vote on this platform to get their votes in.

I get what you mean as well (I think, but I could still be mistaken. If so, please correct me.). As for the how, that would really depend on the act itself, and the type of story being presented. After all, you're obviously not going to depict and frame such acts within the scope and genre of...

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Definitely an original spell worth noting for sure. Right alongside the "Summon SpiderDragon" spell. My approach is, and always will be, to neither glorify, nor gloss-over anything in any of my works. The good stuff, or the bad stuff. If it holds relevance to the narrative, it is included...

The Ravenloft novels would definitely be a good place to start. For a more detailed and specific list, you can get the details HERE

It really depends on the execution, but yeah, they can certainly spice things up a bit. Though, for clarity's sake when the protagonist is the villain, the story's antagonist will typically find themselves as either another type of villain (IE: Hellsing: Ultimate) or as the Hero of the story...

Since this was all you're asking for, I'll refrain from the critique this time around, but also really should point out that that draft does still need a fair bit of polish as well, and would recommend re-reading it yourself as well.

1) Yes. 2) Released on here so far, 6. In total: 24+ (Though most are introduced gradually, and not all in that moment). 3) I do what I can to keep things streamlined by not having everyone speaking at once (in detail) and keep those moments tightly presented through the lens of one specific...

If I'm being honest, No. I don't. When I'm writing I take my time because slow-burn is what I tend to write in. That's not to say writing slow-burn is easy, it's just my "default" because it's also the kind of fiction that I like to read. That said, I'll also draft up whatever content I want to...

I've got the page open on my laptop, but need to get some sleep at the moment. I'll try to get to it at least sometime tomorrow El.

Could it work: Absolutely Would it be cool: Depending on the execution, most assuredly. Would it be difficult: That depends on how deep into the nature of war, and the conflict itself, you are willing to delve. Surface level would be trivially easy, but also equally shallow. (These guys hate...

Overall, no. But this is mostly a matter of personal genre preferences than a matter of the story premise, or whether it intrigues me or could work narratively speaking. Cultivation series aren't something that truly interests me as a reader; but there is certainly an audience for them. What...

It's good, in concept, but without seeing the execution I can't really give you any solid, or worthwhile, feedback. You've got a lot of potential there for what could be a stand-alone light novel volume if it's executed well, or potentially even something set up to be a part of a larger story...

Between them both, this one is significantly better in terms of literary, and descriptive, quality as compared to the latter example, but if I'm being completely honest, neither of them truly convey the character in a memorable fashion. The first does a much better job of painting the scene, but...

Thanks for your vote, El. There's still plenty of time for more votes, but as it stands (right now) the Lance opening is in the lead. UPDATE - After tallying the votes that have come in so far via external platforms, the vote is now tied [at the time of writing this] with multiple pending vote...

A few lifetimes ago. (Not literally; that'd be closer to 1996 in the summer.). I started writing creatively back in middle-school, role-playing in online chat-rooms around 7th grade. Not long after, I learned that my late-father was also a writer (beyond just being in a band, and writing the...

Aestelle Nocte - Chapter 3 Polls dropped in both Feedback & Latest Chapter discussion threads. Be sure to vote in both for the chapter opening you prefer for the story. Votes are anonymous, and you can vote in both polls, which close in six days time. The winner (determined by total cumulative...