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  1. MarekSusicky

    Rate my story idea

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    Writing Economy for a fantasy novel

    Alright, so you have wall of text. Prepare for another wall of text! Economics in Chaos Because what’s an epic world without a dysfunctional economy? 1. Counterfeiting: Fake It ‘Til You Break It Mana-storing coins are all the rage, but you know some rogue is out there thinking, "Challenge...
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    Any constructive criticism welcome

    in the hidden corner of scribblehub feedback office is reading the script, the cigar hangs from the corner of mouth, a wisp of smoke curling up like a question mark "A bookstore, not just a bookstore. A mountain of secrets..." taps ash into a worn brass tray "Listen, kid, first, your synopsis...
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    An Author Dilemma Questions

    I was 8. I was 8. No, I was 8.
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    First Person Or Third Person?

    You mentioned the site which shall not be named by name! :s_eek: We're all doomed!
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    I need your advice on how to show, rather than tell.

    Takes a long drag from a cigar, ash falling onto a manuscript littered desk. The scribblehub feedback office smells of stale coffee, desperation, and crushed dreams. "Alright, kid." Taps the manuscript with a weathered finger. "You've got... something here. But right now? It's like watching a...
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    Tag Someone You Want To Beat To A Pulp In This Site.

    Thank god we get gifts from baby jesus and not santa.
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    Feedback on my new upcoming synopsis

    clears throat "Yes, it must've been another universe then... Now it should be correct."
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    Feedback on my new upcoming synopsis

    :blob_hide: Frack, I got it messed up then! There must've been some universe swapping at work here and not my mistake! :censored: Let's rewrite!
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    Feedback on my new upcoming synopsis

    "Okay Banana man, let's read..." slams a red-inked manuscript onto the desk, leans back in a creaking office chair in scribblehub feedback office "Listen, kid. You call this an 'improvement?'" scoffs "Let me break this down for you." tears a page and circle the start "Your first draft had a...
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    First Person Or Third Person?

    When the story follows one character, first person. Otherwise third person limited. I like to write in past tense first person, but thoughts are present tense. Looks cool! This. Thank you for doing that, I use the same technique, I wish more authors did that. Or at least said in which head...
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    Your Top 5 Favourite and Worst Tropes

    :ROFLMAO: you got me here rofl irl
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    Name one thing that never fails to make you cry

    Yes. I second that. They just know... how to make you cry, and you still go and still do it despite knowing it.
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    Daily Word Count Thread

    Today I wrote... Wait, what. Today I deleted 341 words. What the pek. :sweating_profusely:
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    Want a cultivation book cover? Follow these two easy steps!

    Wahahaha! Okay, banana man, ya also got me. :blob_sweat:
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    Story here vs Royal

    If I didn't know some readers there really like my story I would not post. The amount of 0.5s and unfollow I got when I went for a hiatus and got back is insane. Like yes bro, you didn't like I wasn't posting. Fair enough, just unfollow without 0.5 :( I read it until I got to Dreamwalker...
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    cool anime weapon for a protag?

    Also call me basic, but playing carmina burana and getting excalibur would be very epic moment :blob_sweat: That's my favorite moment, having supreme weapon, but Excalibur is only as powerful as the heart and will of its wielder. So when they get power hungry... :cool:
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    Slowpaced storyline

    If I can add my 4 cents, you don't want to overwhelm the reader at the start. So if the price for going faster would be introducing tens of characters in two chapters :blob_dizzy: That would be more harming.
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    How do I promote my story further?

    Woah, hats off, I wouldn't be able to do it >_< All must be perfect!
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    Reusing powers?

    Y'know, it's a coin toss. With superhero "quirks", any can work. Is it set a done? I mean the hero can't get upgrade or something, they'll get the power and that's it? Then something with high ceiling. Also, there is probably marvel/dc hero with that power anyway, so wouldn't be afraid...
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