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The hunter would be great if you can make a good background of him hunting dangerous beasts and is the only here with great survability which can make great scenes filled with some twists and tension. You can make comparasion between thr beasts and the monsters that could affect the reader...

Wetwater where the Weterians live... such an amazing place. You can also use mirrors for the name since water is often compared to it, so something like Mirage.

Wetwater

The only one I can think of is "My World traveling system" it has the start of The gamer with even with same first dungeon, etc and it's not a fic

Not really, I just started writing but at the same time... kind of? I made a fanfic so I can then later make my own novel, so does a fic counts as preparation? My first chapters were bad and even with some editing they are still trashy. If it wasn't for someone reccomending quillbot and google...

Something like a world with different groups of Vampires with MC being in the 'neutral' one, the 'bad' and 'good' Vampores are harrasing this one wanting to absorb them to gain power. The mental could go in hundread of ways, from romantic with the MC's 'Converter' the one who made him a...

The fact that the mental development is done with this is what I don't like feels cheap and almost always ends up in the same way. There is many novels with vampires described in another way like Blood spirits or sinply getting stronger with blood for example. Deadman Wonderland has the...

I mean, knowing how big the universe is and how we are just pebbles living in a bigger pebble is just enough for you to feel like this. Knowing how long lived the universe is the 'Legends' we know are litteraly nothing in the grand scheme of things, even the most important person or action...

Well, if the village was destroyed there is a couple of way but most of them where said already. So here I go. Support from someonei n the crowd, having saved someone or simply a figurehead like a village chief descalating this with logic would work. An external person like someone who came...

My problem with most OP mc is that almost every event feels meaningless since the MC can just end it in one swift strike. I remember one where the MC had some problem with someone influential and he went through so much when he could kill the guy and the reason why he didn't was 'not getting...

Maybe making the main component of the lethal guns extremely key for something else? And then a pact was made to use an alterntive. If you don't go for the limiting resouce part the only other way I can think of is a really big and brutal event where lethal weapons were used resulting in the...

If the problem is the writing itself you can try searching for somethig that speaks thing you write outloud, you can find some errors like that. Maybe searching for some AMV? I got some ideas when listening to music that I like. Sorry if Im not of that much help, great to see someone keeping...

A lot of people were pointing mistakes here and there and by with the time, I simply made less mistakes. Don't by afraid of publishing a 'first try' novel, you can rewrite it later like how many do. A Fanfic could also be a good idea if you want to test thing first.

Does he ever come back to the island? Adding child-like representations of things of he saw in the island could be amazing for this story and how he see them when he grows up. Like, in the first chapters saying glowing thing in the wall and then some kind of cave glowing mushroom. Glowing rock...

I remember reading about 'super' power of babies, like ducks and their sticky feets to climb. Humans babies have a amazing grip strength to hold into their mothers. Tools can be rocks or sticks, they don't need to be complex to be used as one. Humans pretty much evolved that way because they...

Dont kangaruus throw their babies as a way to distract predators? Better one dying than all of them

Bookstore owner works? Is more of a fantasy but Im not the Demon god lackey is a great one and the bookstore part is a important part

I did some when I felt like it, pretty much when I was making circles on how to progress with the story... The start usually doesn't matter that much as long as new chapters comes out so I would leave it as something secondary that you keep in mind but don't focus on.

Isn't the shinigami a ghost? And Dan can transform into one

I guess everthing narrows down on how you make use of said cliche. But cliche is pretty much what you already or expect from a event. Examplo. Fight bandits, heard about girl, go to save girl, girl is princess/important, get great reward, she falls in love with mc. A twist? You go save her...