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  1. Layenlml

    Has any fanfic authors thought of rewriting their novel into ones they originals?

    Not really but I do plan to use my own MC into a 'misterious' multidimensinal character for future stories, given that he can change form as he pleases. Basically placing him as the 'appeared out of nowhere' Op character to mold some things and maybe help the MC when I need to.
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    Early life of immortals / long lived species

    I remember reading something like this in how dogs age and the belief that they age 1:7 ratio compared to us, basically they age like 50 years (for us) super fast on their first years of life and then they age the rest slowly. You can go for accelerated growth at first the slow it down until...
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    How do some other authors update multiple novels so often?

    Computer. There you got it, I use a phone and it sucks.
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    Mutants in the beginning of the industrial revolution (at or around 1700)

    There needs to be a way to contol each other, meaning a super and effective weapon againts mutant like the typical skill nullifier thing or else there will be no equal standings. But, what can humans offer to mutants? Even one low mutants should be stronger and better than a normal human... My...
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    Writing I need guides and tips for writing a Battle Academy novel

    Dont forget the mysterious hot girl that ends up being part alien due to some experiment, there is always one of those.
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    Its Dusk from Arknights.

    Its Dusk from Arknights.
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    Long living elves would be kinda weird

    There is one problem here... how do the know that they are long lived without a civilization? They should live like a normal human in terms of how they perceive the world and then change as they age and started noticing those around dying. The description fits a thousands/million years old elve...
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    EXP, Skill, Stats and Leveling

    System change did something for that on the job/class part, the more you grind the rarer choices you get depending on your stats and mastery of skills, usually they are fitting to what you do with and with growth clases and rarity being so important that the mc rivals amost everyone due to...
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    Ask Me Anything

    Yeah, i've read about it long ago... how it does mess up your perception of real womens since the ones you see in there are, do and look 'unreal' or are fake, and it also leads you deeper into searching for rarer things which ends in degeneracy... its quite mess up and all that is without...
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    Ask Me Anything

    What are the consecuences of watching porn sites on your life?
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    I learned Art

    Her... legs? Either the pose or the clothes don't really say femenine. Either that or the chest area and the waist a little thinner. You could also go for the face with eye lashes, red cheeks or pink lips? Any datail would do with all that black, I think.
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    Pick your only stat

    Health seems to be the go for me. Asida from the partial inmortality, If you want to train like crazy without fear of injuring yourself even when practicing magic this is the best. Try and error aproach. Strength is also great making you body getting used to its own strength and growing...
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    I need your help again

    You! Return here in this instant. I feel the wording a little... weird? But not unreadable. You need to search way to make things move forward during a persecution something like to give a better feeling to the scene and if you combine it with better ways to show how scared they are or how...
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    Death of a Physically weak villian.

    The first part missing is obviously the witness of such event and the one who spreads the word of a killer hero(Great role of a possible future villian BTW). Sounds great.
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    Question about gunpowder weapon's in mediaval setting.

    The best way is having a smart enchancer or blacksmith in the enemy team and have them make countermesures after the first impact of the weapons. It's always weird that they don't enchance the firearms with magic but... lethality wise, firearms are as deadly as a fireball, faster and more...
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    How to make the cutest character

    I can give you an example. Is a father(kinda) daughter relationship and the girl always makes the other big bad boys turn ridiculus and some other things. Its called MARVEL: Gamer path. I love the scene where her dad fights and she dissapears and in the end of the fight she brings the OP cat...
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    Plz help

    I mean, your last chapter only had like a 100 views? That's pretty shitty, just give up and save time. Whats the worse that could happen? Dissapointing 80-90 people? Just give up.
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    drew her once more

    A loli Kiku Juon then?
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    Reincarnated as a minor character in a video game world, who would you choose to be?

    So an anti-social and weak but undestructible, depending on the setting and the world it could be decent. A cannon-foddler with another name and almost useless. Depends on the power system or finding an ally like a demon lord and become an aid. Could be fun supporting some starting dungeon...
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    Powers/abilities based on the seven sins

    Lust is always sex, sex and sex so if you want something unique reproduction, like a bee or ant queen having strong soldiers the stronger her partner, Meruem in ant arc of HxH is an example. You can also mix Sins and Virtues. Like having someone lustfull strengthen her/his partner based on...
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