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    Classes for LitRPG?

    I've always liked dragoons from final fantasy. They're a spin on warriors who use spears and launch powerful piercing attacks from land or air. Their attacks take a turn to hit though, so there's room to play with how that's implemented.
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    Do I write too much?

    Honestly it completely depends on your content. Of it's that much words of fluff then it can seriously dilute the work, but if your story requires that much words because there's that many events going on then it's great you can write that much. Take game of thrones, those books are dense but...
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    Magic Beasts vs. Spirit Beasts vs. Demon Beasts vs. Quantum Beasts vs. Soul beasts vs. Familiars?

    There is none, they're just all different names that are popular to use for beasts. If a story has multiple of them then they'll tell the distinction at that time (if the writing is decent)
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    Interesting Magic Systems

    A couple I personally like is item based contract based magic systems. With item based the magic comes from the item instead of the person and the challenge is in getting and learning to use strong items. Contracts is basically when one gets magic by making a contract with another being, this...
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    Plot devices in stories that causes one to frown?

    I have quite a few, but since my mind is currently filled with hopes and fears for guardians of the galaxy 3, I hate it when someone gets with the clone or alternate version of their lover and it's treated like a good thing. It's not the same person they spent all those years getting to know and...
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    Thoughts on Fanfiction?

    Only write fanfic if you love the world and or characters. They're more to explore thise two aspects rather than to tell a grand tale of their own, well, thise of them that aren't just horny self insert fuckathons anyway(though some of the good ones still have that aspect to it.) Yeah, you will...
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    Thoughts on these Reborn Isekai story ideas?

    I like 1, 2, 3, and 5. That said, 4 has potential too, I'm just not really feeling it personally. Of the four I vibe with, I like 2 the most, though that's partly because I'm very interested in a story with a dryad protagonist.
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    help me choose

    Fooly Cooly is only six episodes and is a pretty good time. The original, you do not need to watch the sequels.
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    Spatial magic, magic system ideas.

    Best Beginner spell I can think of(that's not busted) is spatial designation. It's pretty much a kiddy version of area lock, you designate an area and form a spatial border around it. It's not impenetrable like area lock, but what passes by the boundary gets slowed down as it's like passing...
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    Help With Dungeon Core Novel

    Do a poll. If you already have ideas you find interesting, then us throwing more out isn't really gonna help you. I suggest doing a poll like that on somewhere like here instead of with your readers. That way if you realize you like another option more after one's been chosen, there's less...
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    I need ideas for this backstory

    Hmmm. If he's already a part of it, and writing him out is too troublesome, then it might still be enough to just minimize his role and mentions (I recommend this method if you plan to get the backstory over and done with in one to two chapters). Alternatively, you could also enhance his role...
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    Is the new Avatar movie going to bomb?

    I hope it does well. I don't want James Cameron to end his Career on a low note, and this movie has the ability to end it if it flops with the insane amount of money spent on it.
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    Are AMVs still a thing?

    I don't know if they're still popular but a few probably still come out. Man, hearing about amcs takes me back though, I'll never forget when I was riding the bus and a friend passed me this beauty.
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    Can someone read my web novel and give some feedback?

    A few issues. First off, you might want to start with a prologue. This seems like a very specific world where people have grown up with the supernatural aspects as if it were gravity, so some explanation on that is needed. I'd also suggest opening up on a more human scene where we get introduced...
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    I need ideas for this backstory

    You don't need the rapist caretaker, it's gratuitous and doesn't really flow into the strongest plot points enough. The caring mother and the man who raises him in the criminal world after her accident, these are the focal points to center the backstory around. Instead of the caretaker, have the...
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    "Oh I gotta avoid this character!"

    Yes, from a web novel called Sevens. A semi relevant character gets ignored by the mc for reasons. It's the only one that immediately comes to mind, but if there's one there must be more.
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    Help me choose a title

    The first and fourth honestly feel too clinical(mind you I kinda like the fourth, but i don'tthink most people would,) so it's really down to the 2 and 3rd. I'm leaning more to two, but honestly both work.
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    Recommend me fresh stories

    This young master is not cannon fodder is pretty fresh as far as cultivation stories go. Cultivation Chat group is also pretty nice in that regard. Sevens is an amazing webnovel that's a blast to read. Chrysalis takes a pretty unfamiliar path with the reincarnation genre like Tree of Aeon does...
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    Writing Prompt Write a story in 6 words

    What an unforgettable autumn, right Ray?
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    Need help on making a prideful, vulgar, shit-talking MC likable

    I suggest reading Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto’s twin sister, as it does what you're asking for pretty well. Having a good relationship with the siblings is a good start though, honestly so long as a character is likeable in mundane day to day settings they tend to get forgiven for whatever...
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