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  1. LiteraryWho

    A bit of advice

    Tell *me* what to do! No, really, I need the advice.
  2. LiteraryWho

    My short form — what do you think?

    I don't know if this is exactly a response to your story, but animals from zoos will return to their cages if driven out of them. Assuming they aren't killed and eaten along the way. Is it weird I'm bothered by the extra 'l'?
  3. LiteraryWho

    What's your least liked or most hated part of writing?

    I will literally drop any book or story (that isn't Lord of the rings itself) if it wastes my time on long descriptions of stuff that doesn't matter. If you wanted to paint a picture so bad, go to art class.
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    What's your least liked or most hated part of writing?

    I actually kind of hate everything about writing (the actual writing part itself, specifically). I much prefer the world building before hand, and the editing/redrafting after. Writing the initial prose is like pulling teeth.
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    Average rate of healing do you have in your story if a character breaks a bone

    It depends on the story, of course. In most of them, a broken bone would heal at the regular rate (i.e. if I was going to feature a broken bone in the plot, would look up how long it normally takes), though in the one with "magical healing" bones (and everything else) heal in seconds or less...
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    Motivation Challenges I Face as a Japanese Writer Translating into English

    Literally just persistence, tbh. I always write *something* every day (even if it's crap), and sometimes I write something productive.
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    There are NO bad jokes

    See if I can get myself banned challenge (no slurs, any%) A sad man walks into a doctors appointment, tells the doctor he wants to kill himself. Doctor says, "Have you tried turning yourself into a woman?" The man tries that, but is still sad, so he returns. The doctor says, "Of course...
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    Concept of a Story: A Writer's Perspective

    I laugh because there was no option to cry
  9. LiteraryWho

    How does Envy attribute dialogue?

    The second dialog tag tutorial I've seen on SH, but I think this one does a better job in spite of being a fraction the size.
  10. LiteraryWho

    Here's to all who love writing.

    Now if only we could be paid even as well as that guy to do it
  11. LiteraryWho

    The sin/virtue that describes you the best is...

    Cringe :blob_evil:
  12. LiteraryWho

    Reader polls! Again! Fantasy Races poll!

    I second the sentiment that the key to interesting "fantasy" races in stories is not how often some particular morphology appears in other stories, but in how their culture develops given the difference in nature. Like, if goblins are naturally low empathy/high group cohesion, what does that...
  13. LiteraryWho

    Favoritism

    Elinor, from Sense and Sensibility. The one true waifu.
  14. LiteraryWho

    So... I played some very old games.

    Starting to feel the creaking in your bones yet? :blob_evil_two:
  15. LiteraryWho

    Audible AI Narration

    The DuoLingo voice model is unironically amazing, but I suspect it's a lot of work to make it sound as good as it does (in terms of telling the model when and how to emote and such). Given the lack of ready made training data (i.e. books with the sections already tagged), I suspect a general...
  16. LiteraryWho

    Favourite Colour?

    I see only one other person gets to keep their kidneys. Green haters get the blender!
  17. LiteraryWho

    how to acquire more readers?

    Tolkien? I didn't know you had a SH account! (on a serious note, asides from the last bit, this was probably all good advice)
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    How would a fight between god's work.

    The actual answer to this question is, "However you want it to work." That said, one common method of having gods fight each other is through each other's followers (if your gods are built like that). They could have champions, or grant powers to mortal, or whatever. You have to design...
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