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  1. Varstark

    Merry Christmas...Just felt like saying it.

    Might be pretty common, but when I was little, I actually thought Boxing Day was about boxing, not boxes.
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    NTR knee jerk

    It's a fetish that's never going to explored truly realistically or vividly by most, because it would be vomit-inducing, enraging and too emotionally dangerous, and not titillating at all. Most of them honestly feel divorced from the average real life experience, which is good and fine. A lot of...
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    Ask me your biggest civilization/ history related queysions

    What was Germania like during the height of the Roman Empire? Were there like, actual nation states with unified identities, or were they just a bunch of tribes telling the Romans to piss off? Somewhere in-between?
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    Blackmail > Non-consensual

    Seconding Aiue Oka. He actually makes hypnosis fun. Female PoV is honestly the only kind of NTR I can get into. Mostly because I feel NTR/cuckolding is to women what harems are to men - a form of sexual victory.
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    How do you write action? As in fight scenes.

    Depends on the tempo of the battle, I guess, and what you want to omit and what you want to show, as well as the mood of the battle that you want. Is there ample preparation beforehand and a buildup to the action? Is it a quick ambush or assassination? Does the POV character feel starkly aware...
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    Blackmail > Non-consensual

    1. Porn is always best when the corruption is done with clarity of mind. 2. Merry Christmas. 3. People always get the best ideas on the loo.
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    What kind of fictional character are you?

    Bridge bunny who's sole job is to inform the higher ups how fucked they are.
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    Do you ever feel horny toward this world?

    To quote a drill instructor, "PUMP THOSE PUSH UPS LIKE YOU'RE FUCKING THE EARTH." If asteroids smash planets, does that mean that Jupiter gets all the dick?
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    How do you write when you fall into the depression of you character?

    Disengage and try to pinpoint what got me too involved, because at that point it's no fun. I'm not trying to write a diary about my fantasies; I'm trying to write a story about my fantasies, and that requires a certain amount of third persion viewing of myself. Listening to music often helps me...
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    Writing Prompt Describe a Room #2

    Entering his father's study, he could've sworn he'd stepped back in time, but the clutter of the drab, modern town beyond the stately window advocated otherwise. It was a crowded, yet stately room, with a grandfather clock set like a sentinel by the tall window, puzzling instruments beckoning...
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    Why aren't people using quotes and dialogue tags?

    That's just the British. Unless they're using American spelling. Then you can shudder.
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    The Most Satisfying Power Fantasy

    In Part 1, maybe a teensie bit. Part 2 managed to rectify that rather well. LitRPG in general does power fantasies rather well, so long as they're well written. Self improvement and gains are achieved in a linear, simple and tried and proven manner, instead of all the awkward stumbling around...
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    I don't feel confident on my new story

    There are grammar checkers online. Free ones. Some may be of questionable quality and have word count limits, but they are there. As for improving grammar, there's usually only a few proven ways to git gud, such as repeatedly reading well edited, published works to get a feel for proper grammar...
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    Thanks! It was a busy year for all of us last year, so I completely forgot about having an...

    Thanks! It was a busy year for all of us last year, so I completely forgot about having an account until I came back to check for more stories!
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    Forgotten Title The Lord Compells You!

    That's the one where the protagonist says something socially suicidal about an idol, not stab someone IIRC. Blue Exorcist? Tokyo Ravens? What do you mean by 'Japanese person meeting a priest'? Is the priest not Japanese?
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    Writing How do you go about making a protagonist "intimidating?"

    Off the top of my head without any form of research, in no particular order: - Establish a prodigious and/or outlandish and disturbing feat beyond the capabilities of ordinary people that the protagonist is capable of pulling off without breaking a sweat. - The people around the protagonist must...
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    Arifureta Season 2

    It's been a while since I read it, but I know it's good enough for seasonal anime. Revenge porn always does well, so there's that, and undeserved suffering always makes for a good one.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    How does it happen? Does the entire world just instantly become a shitty London neighbourhood without a single pub in sight?
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    To change or not to change?

    Well, there's 'Blake' which possibly came from an old english word for someone with dark hair or skin and sounds mighty similar to 'black', and there's the Norman surname 'Long' which sounds exactly the same as the Chinese word for dragon, also a surname. Blake Long - neither are overly strange...
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    I Cant seem to stick to one Story

    You could think of those ideas less as individual stories of their own, and like NotaNuffian said, mix and match to see what you come up with. Sometimes, because they came out of one head, there's a connecting thread between those ideas that you can try and unearth, similar concepts and mirror...
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