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Just to be the mean spoilsport again. By now, everyone knows what I'm trying to say, so I'll spare you the drama this time.

Image is nice. Desperately wanted to find something to tear it apart, but it's a very cool image. The more important part is how you actually write this character, though... still, from the looks and style department, he's quite cool. Although he looks edgy and pretentious af, that's the...

It's totally not a genre I'd ever read but it's quite interesting. However you switch between present and past tense... or I'm just being mentally challenged again and I'm mistaken, which is quite likely. I also think your paragraphs are way too long and difficult to read. Like 2 or 3 times as...

Well, you already have a clear vision of the story, and it looks like you thought this through. Not like I agree, but hey, it's YOUR world, and I'd be really interested to see your vision of that world. Why don't you show us your vision of that world? All that's left is to put it in words. Why...

Their shields are so strong, NOTHING on Planet Earth, including HP spells, could break them. You could literally enter the jumper and then smash into every enemy with your shields up, and could defeat anyone.

Roflmao, you just got enough firepower, mobility, and defenses to blow up a fucking fleet with at least twenty to thirty motherships. He can fucking obliterate anything in his way. There is absolutely no balance in your story; your MC is invincible and has the firepower to obliterate anything...

Images are too small. You have to zoom in like crazy to see anything. Also, not wanting to shatter your dream... who the hell wants these generic AI images? You get the most generic scenes ever, and anyone who likes reading doesn't need them. It's fine to use AI to create a cover or a few...

Terrible. You could never turn this into a story without suffering through literal hell. So niche, so specific, so hard to write. Balance is totally dead, so this wouldn't be a story with any kind of suspense because the MC would be without any equals. This looks like a story with your...

There are like thousands of programs capable of detecting spelling mistakes. He can use whatever online tool, site, writing program, or AI helper, I don't care. He just needs to pick one.

Aside from that, it's a cool story. Why not turn it into a short story? A couple of chapters would be enough.

This is a feedback thread, not an Update thread. If you want to post Updates or discuss the story, check out the Reader section, though honestly, this Forum is not really suitable for advertising. I'll give it a read when I have some time, but after reading the first chapter, it's neither...

Uff.... Uff.... I like your goal. I read the first chapter, and I just want to give you my honest opinion, analyzing just this one, tiny end of the first major fight scene. To begin with, the result: Scale of 1-10. I'd rate it a 3 out of 10. I like a few ideas, but I hate how they're executed...

I think the LN style is not the main problem. You need to work on grammar... badly. Your sentence structure is not only awkward, but outright wrong... at least in some cases. A tool like Grammarly would work wonders. I also think your language comprehension isn't quite there, as some of your...

That's it. Using AI to correct Grammar and spelling mistakes is fine! A lot of people, including myself (through Grammarly), do it. But when you say "polish," it essentially takes your story as a rough example and then creates it's own story out of it. That could be viewed as generated...

Pretty sure these stories were not deleted because they were mistaken as fanfics, but they were against the content guidelines, specifically, the one I posted below. Glancing at your stories, I'm fairly certain you copied them straight from your AI interface into the SH editor. I can't explain...

The account is already deleted on the main site... not a big surprise considering these were two sentences written by a self-declared author. My grammar sucks, and I constantly make mistakes, but reading that little introduction was so painful that a third of my remaining brain cells (so exactly...

Late to the party :) Definitely what we're all thinking, though, even after the recent changes. 100% sure. Some high(low)lights: Absolute clanker. If this has already been reworked... the original must have been quite... special.

Just a couple of things: The use of — is a sign, but when I started out it was all the rage, and I got used to it. I only recently switched back to ';' Also, with 1 small prompt, you can set a rule for AI never to use — but solely rely on ',' and ';' so you can't judge a story purely on that...