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One thing I forgot... You might hate Webnovel... but I'd suggest uploading your story there as well. You have a very successful and, by the looks of it, well-written fanfic. Upload it to Webnovel just so others don't steal it.... Usually, even those cockroaches bother to look if it's already...

Not only that. It is also monetized: However, if you are the author, you can talk with WN Support. You can email them and visit their Discord. It's a little tedious, but I did go down this route myself because some idiot stole my story (which is already uploaded at WN) and just copied it. If...

Pressed F5 for 10 minutes, no need to thank me. :blob_popcorn:

I like trains

When the artists are ten times more eloquent than the author, I can't help but be sceptical regarding the future financial earnings of this work, which seems to be the desired goal.

No, there isn't. It's the core concept. These stories are literally about cultivating their bodies, minds, and souls, measuring progress in a tangible way, almost exclusively using different stages and sub-stages. If that aspect is lacking or modified, it isn't Cultivation anymore. It's like a...

Uff Overall, I also like it, but I think the price is on the high end. I mean, of course, for 100 bucks you can't expect fully detailed drawings, but it definitely feels like it was done in a hurry. Wish you the best, but it's a lot of money... a little too much for me personally, but maybe...

No, it doesn't in my opinion. The people mastering these new words are merely learning new knowledge and acquiring stronger techniques. They do not cultivate. You can compare it to Harry Potter... they also learn new spells and acquire knowledge, but they sure as hell are no cultivators. The...

The first chapter has hundreds (not a lie, checked it with Grammarly) spelling errors. Your grammar is also very shaky. Every single sentence has multiple issues. I applaud you for not using AI, but at the same time, you desperately need something like Grammarly to edit your chapter. As is, I...

I like this system a lot. It's not completely original because the concept of true names or word magic has been done quite a few times, but it's still solidly combined. I detect a little Skyrim flair as well. However, the question is about a magic/cultivation system. What you have described is...

Formatting is off. Writing seems very... "artificial." The plot itself is not too bad, but with the bad formatting and overall vibe that I'm getting, you'd have to threaten me with a gun to keep reading. Can't keep reading when I get that certain "artificial" feeling in my stomach.

Missing tags. You should add them... that will also give your story some visibility. Story is kinda interesting, I might give it a try when I have some time. One more thing: You have to have two paragraphs in your "blurb," and both start with: "When." Might want to change that.

Congratulations (I mean that for real), but I can't help but think of this Meme when I read it.

Damn, have they recorded it? Absolute peak.

Absolute best signature. :blob_popcorn:

Did it a couple of times... but it's so time-consuming... so now I'm back to blocking & ignoring them.

Haha, I think you are not correctly informed. The time when stuff at the dollar store cost a dollar is long over... It's just a garbage store now that sells cheap products. Price doesn't matter, and the only thing of the former dollar store that remains is the name... and that they are still...