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    Gender Bender Bait

    Knowing some people who get REALLY defensive against one of those words, "stupid" is valid but I would avoid the other, not just as a courtesy but also as one to them...
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    Gender Bender Bait

    I would say "a lot of readers are stuck in preconceived 'tunnels' and get upset if a story wanders out of them, or they are just lazy" rather than the specific words you used but, yeah, that sounds about right.
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    All fanfic writers are creatively bankrupt thieves.

    I know that happens. Had a character who was supposed to be a minor character who just keeps showing up in passing - either coming home or going to work when the others are getting stuck in adventures - decide she HAD to be an MC; I tried to resist but then she pointed out plot holes that her...
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    I hate that elves live for a 1000 years. I don’t care if it’s the staple. It’s jarring.

    I am immortal, have inside me blood of kings, I have no rival, no man can be my equal. Take me to the future of your world.
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    What's your checklist for giving specific rating to a story?

    4: I really liked it but there are some flaws. Will probably give a review and point out where it missed on being a 5. 5: Great story, technically well done, hope it sees print or otherwise helps the author make a living. Will probably explain why I felt this way in a review as well. Anything...
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    What will the next big webfiction trend be?

    Lee Childs cited the 80s but gave that as the reason why he created Jack Reacher. If his show is getting another season, that may be the kick needed for this to happen. That may be the most likely trend, come to think of it, and exactly for that reason. May even merge with the "alpha male"...
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    Writing Prompt You create Magical Girls.

    This brings up an interesting question: Intended victim recruit: "Uh, sir, this document you want me to sign constantly refers to 'Magical Girls' - as if they never grow up into, say, Magical Women. Is this true? And is it through attrition or do they just stop aging?"
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    Name for God's City

    Utopia. The Silver City. The Soul Society. Babylon. Paradise. Argentium. The Estates. Tian or Ding or The North Pole (Chinese). Svargalaka (Indian), Have seen all of these used for the Otherworld or the palace of Ahuru Mazda (the likely source of the concept of Heaven in modern Christianity...
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    How to Use Food in Fiction

    Thought so (or maybe they posted a link to your video - just saw the subject and wondered if it was the same). SubStack is an on-line community originally for non-fiction writers which started, about a year or a little more ago, to embrace all forms of writers. It is kind of halfway between...
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    How to Use Food in Fiction

    As an aside, is this also posted to SubStack or did someone else do a Stack on the same subject in the last 24 hours?
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    What will the next big webfiction trend be?

    Wait - is this a prediction or a complaint? :)
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    Are Stakes Necessary?

    I would argue that love (or, in many cases, just sex) IS the stake in a love story. Slice of Life stuff though... those can be pretty much anything, with both stakes and conflict optional. I
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    Are Stakes Necessary?

    It varies by story - but often, stakes/conflict and risk are what keep the readers interested so are always useful, even if not always NEEDED.
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    Your favorite genre?

    To read? Comedy, Horror or "blended genres" (Science-fantasy, Dark Fantasy, etc.). To write: Super-hero, horror, high fantasy.
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    Draft Feedback: Short Prologue

    But.... but... but... the Cake is a Lie!
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    Help me choose my writting style!

    I would consider the whole work (les plus millieu? been forty years since I took a French class...) rather than the fragment - what seems to work best for the overall product? From this snapshot, the second was a little more dramatic in feel so probably the better choice but ... this is just a...
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    What will the next big webfiction trend be?

    I think that has always been a moderately successful niche, ever since Sheridan LeFanu (sp.?) wrote "Camilla" but don't know if it will ever be more than that. Maybe. Maybe it's time for Westerns to come back - they keep trying about every five or six years, and some series - usually TV - gets...
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    What will the next big webfiction trend be?

    Here's how one key scene might have gone if Bella really was the nerd she claimed; "I'm a... say it..." "Kryptonian?" "Uh... wait, what?" "Daxamite then?" "No, that's silly..." "A Mutant!" "No. No, I drink blood!" "You're The Tick!" "Uh.. hey, Jacob, take her, she's all yours..."
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    What will the next big webfiction trend be?

    Kind of hope not but half expect it... Hmm... maybe I'm getting another (bad) idea here... :D
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    Share your Novel Covers!

    I'm more fantasy/superhero/horror stuff. Though aliens in 1920 could be interesting (or just H. P. Lovecraft... :D) And it's more I have a lot of stories trying to get out (and stepping on each other to do so) than that I'm "working on them" - had an idea come up the other day (day after I...
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