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  1. L1aei

    The Word Chain Game (Shiritori)

    Yogurt.
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    As a reader, what kind of protagonist would you be willing to follow in the story?

    Do you mean intentionally dense or... :blob_hmm_two:
  3. L1aei

    New Fantasy Novel | Action + Emotional MC

    Nah, there's more going on here. This fella has sockpuppets giving that novel extra favs and ratings.
  4. L1aei

    How many tits should a woman have?

    I think Cartoon Network also had this aired, so... yeah.
  5. L1aei

    ? New Fantasy Novel – I Will Never Let Her Suffer Again

    Your missed a spot cleaning up after your LLM. :blob_hide:
  6. L1aei

    As a reader, what kind of protagonist would you be willing to follow in the story?

    Over two decades ago, when KOTOR came out, me and my friends labeled characters like this Stupid Evil because the Dark Side choices were just being malicious with no benefit, whereas the Light Side choices were rewarding in many ways. Yeah, I think I did leave a comment somewhere in the first...
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    Yeah, I do try to comprehend the characters and scenes; if I didn't, my feedback would be rather...

    Yeah, I do try to comprehend the characters and scenes; if I didn't, my feedback would be rather awkward when received by the authors. :sweat_smile:
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    You think she's deceptive? Do you remember the early chapters where she is putting on a...

    You think she's deceptive? Do you remember the early chapters where she is putting on a performance as a helpless child on the road? I'm referring to the one after there had been an ambush. She's exploiting how others read her. :blob_hide:
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    Hey, I'm all cool with how everybody writes; as long as I comprehend what you are conveying, and...

    Hey, I'm all cool with how everybody writes; as long as I comprehend what you are conveying, and I am, it's a good read. :blobthumbsup:
  10. L1aei

    As a reader, what kind of protagonist would you be willing to follow in the story?

    Might've answered this already in another thread, but I want someone who's... different. I don't care who they are, but what they are matters. When i see a crowd, I'd enjoy the sudden hush, the looks, and the gap made to be a buffer as whomever, whatever this is just entered the narrative.
  11. L1aei

    Am I making sense over what I'm seeing? :blob_sweat:

    Am I making sense over what I'm seeing? :blob_sweat:
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    A big hint is that she's not stabilizing anything, but doing the opposite. That purple mana...

    A big hint is that she's not stabilizing anything, but doing the opposite. That purple mana isn't resolving fights; it's picking a fight with the ones who laid out the rules. I can picture her at a game, expected to play like the strongest piece on the table, but she feels like someone who'd...
  13. L1aei

    Aurora, you don't have her written as a power-fantasy mascot; she's giving me this vibe like...

    Aurora, you don't have her written as a power-fantasy mascot; she's giving me this vibe like she's a problem the world hasn't realized it has yet. What I mean is that this is not a power fantasy, because those sorts of characters tend to only exist to gratify the writer as a self-insert, or...
  14. L1aei

    What is the hardest character archetype to write?

    Artificial Intelligence. I've got two fanfictions published on here because I thought it'd be a fun challenge. Why is it a challenge? Come on. You know the publicity when you write something that sounds like AI wrote it.
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    Looks good! You got it! :blob_party:

    Looks good! You got it! :blob_party:
  16. L1aei

    Thank you for reminding me to eat; I had yet to do that today.

    Thank you for reminding me to eat; I had yet to do that today.
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    Yeah, figured, but it was there and I was like "YOINK!" and rewrote that scene ASAP. :blob_happy:

    Yeah, figured, but it was there and I was like "YOINK!" and rewrote that scene ASAP. :blob_happy:
  18. L1aei

    Something about being bad at sex scenes in the writer's discussion forum.

    Something about being bad at sex scenes in the writer's discussion forum.
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