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This took me a very hot minute to remember I did have an inconsistency in one of my old novels. I had a side character, sort of a pseudo-antagonist, who was initially named Matt, but I somehow through the chapters transitioned into referring to him in the later chapters as Mark. :blob_sweat...

Then don't disrupt the flow. If you see a problem and others are telling you to make it, listen to yourself. You are around you more often then they ever will be to become concerned over hurting somebody else's feelings on not taking their advice. :blob_salute:

Immerse the inconsistency as a canonical cognitive character flaw. That's clever. :blobthumbsup:

Sometimes chapters are copied and pasted over from a word document. That's an excuse I'm giving, not a valid reason. :blob_okay: Try these divine page breaks on for size: ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ ꙮ Funny historical context: those "symbols" are eyes; now the pages can watch you read. :blob_blank:

I would also add that a chapter hosting a 10K wordcount ain't bad, but we're talking six times that count in a single chapter from this thread's novel; that's a lot to digest in one sitting.

If I'm gone for good, why would I care about what's left behind? :blob_ghost:

I've a son. Enough said.

@TinaMigarlo Listen to this advice.

I ain't savvy on programming language, but when I saw that, I thought "Yeah, I can see why that'd be obscure."

Unless your vote matters on this platform, it ain't just a feeling. :sweat_smile:

When it comes to anything anyone writes, and it centers around the erotic, I have no issue with the content or context. My hesitation is how vast I saw the chapters. You have to keep in mind that some people are on their smartphones and have limited time to read, or there are those with short...

Tatters.

Evil.

Oval.

Tomalley.

Arm.

Lick.

Clanker = bot, but I believe it originates from Star Wars, referencing what the droids were called as a slur. No idea because these chapters are... a lot, and I mean a lot to process in one sitting.

Holee Sheeeeet that's a lot of scrolling in the first two chapters. I'll be serious and check it after I deal with another's.