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  1. TinaMigarlo

    Is this concept, at all, intriguing to you?

    eldoria. you continue to impress me with your precise speech grammar and vocabulary, as well as specialized knowledge of the writing field. Are you like a creative writing professor at a college or something? and that guess fits in with your well cultured sense of quiet propriety and...
  2. TinaMigarlo

    Is this concept, at all, intriguing to you?

    maybe the world could narrate. as if the biosphere, was a living sentient entity. it could take over the third person narration of the goings on of the people exploring. that gives you access to the travelers, even if the world thinks of them as fleas. occasionally let the people in though. I...
  3. TinaMigarlo

    My Solution to Shoehorning

    I do sentence fragments on numbered lines when I outline. tiny goal of chapter, nothing more. sometimes, in reading passes, I notice accidental foreshadows, and they're slight. example. when I decided at the end oir near, to kill the MC and he ended up having his life taken for doing a goiod...
  4. TinaMigarlo

    Mods HELP!

    I forget the international thing, the site I indicated, we were american only. my bad. I'm *poof* gone. leave you to it. apologies.
  5. TinaMigarlo

    Just wanted to say thanks

    Hm. a maverick, eh. now I *gotta* read his first chapter. *scratches his chin* "who's an edgy boy... yeah... that's my edgy boy." relax, just teasing you. I'm sure the intellectual bad boy thing you got going on, drives the art hoes at starbucks wild. more power to you. But I am going to read...
  6. TinaMigarlo

    New smut/erotica novel. tTTitC - the Good Stuff

    I know. its a case of I don't like reality. To get writing chops polished? I need to be around writers and readers. I need to be able to get feedback, and to read other's chapters I need a place to "park" manuscripts, while getting experience with things like covers, blurbs, IDing tropes, etc...
  7. TinaMigarlo

    Just wanted to say thanks

    where's your book
  8. TinaMigarlo

    Mods HELP!

    they do, yet only if you buy this certain brand of quite shitty beer. But if you purchase said swill, "it doesn't get any better than this". also. if you pay the money to get the special package, there's this guy who will teach you the one thing you can say to *any* woman? And she will fall...
  9. TinaMigarlo

    PS - that "review" ended up it stacked several of my posts into one big one? Its kind of epic...

    PS - that "review" ended up it stacked several of my posts into one big one? Its kind of epic. might be good for a laugh.
  10. TinaMigarlo

    wamba? Thanks for the "prodology" definition. that was *right* on cue, excellent comedic timing.

    wamba? Thanks for the "prodology" definition. that was *right* on cue, excellent comedic timing.
  11. TinaMigarlo

    watch out for Conan: the Grammarian "you have misused a participle phrase. *off* with your head!"

    watch out for Conan: the Grammarian "you have misused a participle phrase. *off* with your head!"
  12. TinaMigarlo

    New Fantasy Novel | Action + Emotional MC

    okay... go to the latin, its a prefix. pro- always means pro-totype, pro-logue. Pro is always first or previous. Okay, probably hindi for preface or something. Reading... (time passes) okay. I made it to... I was gonna say chapter two, but its probably chapter 1. on account of the prodology...
  13. TinaMigarlo

    New Fantasy Novel | Action + Emotional MC

    I don't know. I'm new here, but... the force is strong in this one. If I have to bet five bucks, I'm gonna have to bet on L1, lol. time will tell. fuq it. maybe i'll get another coffee, and read chappie one. how bad, could it be. L1? I'm going in... *cover me* (makes hard entry, after a...
  14. TinaMigarlo

    Chapter length in smut scenes

    IMO all chapters should be as long as the scene depicted requires. ^^^ my vote reminds me of music. in classical and progressive, there is no real song length, the track will be as long or as short as it needs to be. But, radio play imposes a 2.5 minute arbitrary limit. No intro, no outro...
  15. TinaMigarlo

    As a reader, what kind of protagonist would you be willing to follow in the story?

    you're using laymen's observations to describe Asperger's. they come off as someone who has no emotional reactions. or you can take it as clinical detachment. or any of several other ways. I think writer's back in the day noticed people like this, and liked the unique character they would make.
  16. TinaMigarlo

    Mods HELP!

    ever give any thought to simply range banning the country code for india? we had a meme tagline on another site... "and nothing was lost" some years back, my own site had a problem but back then it was a constant Ukranian thing. we range banned the country, and *poof*, problem solved. no more...
  17. TinaMigarlo

    What are some things you wish you knew when you started writing?

    generic list... 1) have an idea, write the first chapter. 2) you should have some idea what the story (conflict) is. immediately? write the last chapter. or at least have a *firm* goal of what it is. 3) try to avoid all the "-ly" words. most can be avoided by restructuring the sentence. 4) avoid...
  18. TinaMigarlo

    What are some things you wish you knew when you started writing?

    are you me? lol I resemble that remark
  19. TinaMigarlo

    The Black Box Principle, or How Not to Wreck Yourself Building Your Magnum Opus

    Nice. Very nice. But... now, let's see Paul Allen's riddle answer. seriously though, I was wracking my brain trying to come up with something to satisfy the non-existent riddle. not only did you beat me to it, it was... kino. the force is strong, in this one.
  20. TinaMigarlo

    Came for the titts stayed for the story ???

    I have one writing project, I made... well, I call it a threesome relationship, that's polyamory, gotta love the internet. Got to have that college educated word for the one everyone knows what it means. But yeah, I ended up making it... wholesome. Yeah, roll your eyes, but I either did it or...
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