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  1. Gryphon

    Here's a question for everyone

    As an American, I shall go try hard here. Sixth grade, my history teacher forced us to learn the states, so for any people not from here, here's all the state names. Also not in alphabetical order cause I don't care enough to be orderly. Arkansas Alabama Ohio Florida Mississippi New Jersey...
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    Phrases nobody want to hear

    "So, what I'm hearing here is, you want me to take out your eyeballs so you can see Uranus. Why not use a telescope?"
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    What would make someone drop a story?

    I felt a great disturbance in the Force, as if millions of voices suddenly cried out in terror and were suddenly silenced.
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    What would make someone drop a story?

    I remember being a fan of Subaru's character from Re: Zero and there was a point in time when YouTube would just keep on recommending me Re: Zero videos. I've heard so many people wonder why Subaru just doesn't kill himself because of his ability to rewind time and fix shit, and I'm always like...
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    What would make someone drop a story?

    I don't normally drop stories per say since I try and read at least a books worth of content(around 600 pages) before deciding a story isn't for me. It can be for a number of reasons. My top reason being if your characters aren't interesting. I've only ever dropped a book before completing it...
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    do you like fantasy novels? and coupled with romance?

    Is this bait. Am I about to receive a knock at my door. I'm sorry for liking eromanga sensei! Does that make it better?
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    Objectify yourself

    The man that is known as many things lay on his bed, scrolling through YouTube as if that were the only thing giving his life meaning. He was known as that one kid that in middle school that tried to seem like a badass for no fucking reason except grossly misplaced insecurities. He was known as...
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    Would my story be accepted into RoyalRoad?

    I want to expand my story, My Succubus Roommate, to other sites and I already have other stories on RoyalRoad, but I've put them on hiatus until I get out of school and can officially work on them without problem. My story on here got decently good views for not even being on for a month. I'm...
  9. Gryphon

    Just released my 15th chapter

    I believe that this forum is meant for authors to talk about their newest chapters, maybe? I mean, I doubt that's how it started out considering the fact its in the readers section. Anyway, I just released the 15th chapter of My Succubus Roommate and I think its good. Maybe. I don't know cause I...
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    Smut with Plot or Plot with Smut?

    I'm just kind of wondering cause I'm more on the plot first, smut second section. One of my favorite stories of all time comes from an itch.io NSFW game called Lessons in Love which has one of the best stories I've seen in a while and my own story, My Succubus Roommate, takes heavy inspiration...
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    Looking for Things to Review

    Hello, I'm wondering if you're still reviewing stuff, then I'm wanting to know what you think about my story My Succubus Roommate. I got five 5 star ratings and a single 2 star and because of that I don't know which one is genuine or not since they're not a review. Just a bit of context...
  12. Gryphon

    How do you write action? As in fight scenes.

    So most people in this thread are talking about the flow of action and cause and effect of the action, but I want to talk about the characters in said action. Yes you want your action to flow well and have a reason, but there's one thing that a lot of people overlook when writing a fight scene...
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    Where can I find a good stock image of the thing I'm looking for?

    You are a messiah that can find something, that I have not been able to find in eons, in the matter of seconds. Thank you, my good man.
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    Where can I find a good stock image of the thing I'm looking for?

    I'm pretty decent at photoshop, not the best but decent, and I've been looking for days for a succubus tail that forms a heart. I've been looking forever and have had no luck. Everywhere I look, I only find images of full bodied succubus which I don't have the time, energy, or skill necessary to...
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    Hello. I'm new here and would like to hear some opinions.

    So as the title says, I'm new to this site and I recently posted a story called My Succubus Roommate and am wanting some opinions on if I should do something different, is it good, bad, or literally anything. I can take any criticism by the way no matter how harsh. There are 3 chapters out...
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