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I'm wondering if you can give me some critique on my first chapter whether you like it or don't. I want to spice it up a bit and would like some ideas as to what I could do. I don't know how to do that box thing with the cover and synopsis, so I'm just going to post the link: My Succubus Roommate.

What I did was a posted a chapter every day. For you it'll be easier to do it cause you have a backlog, as for me I wrote every day and posted the chapter after editing. I recommend slowing down publishing chapters once you get caught up. A bit of a tip, if you get to around 15 chapters in your...

Eh, I'm just trying my hardest to graduate high school. Did I say hardest? What I mean is the bare minimum. I only have a few months left and I'm out. I just need to pass two electives and my AP english class and I'm outty. Then I can finally do what I want in life and thats to write. Seriously...

For me, it depends on the themes that I'm going for. If the themes of my story has nothing to do with separate species or people, I don't show other cultures. However, if I do include certain themes like discrimination or unification of living beings, then I make damn sure my cultures are...

I don't read much manga and the only two I've read have been One Piece and Shingeki no Kyojin. I picked up promised neverland since they've never made a season 2. Out of those three, I'd say SnK is my favorite, but I'm 250 chapters into OP and its been getting good, and I've heard it gets...

You have just recently passed away in the hospital and have been buried at a cemetery. You find yourself to somehow still be awake and walking among the living. You see other specters passing you by with little care towards your presence. You're not what they're here for. As soon as you awaken...

A logger comes and cuts you down and turns your body into a chair that a dirty kid sits in all day.

I'm not a knowledgeable person in Lovecraft but I know a bit about Cthulhu so here's my best curse. You are an eldritch being that looks upon the world with an omniscient presence. You have lived for eons, seeing the universes creation and will live to see its death. There is nothing that can...

You have died as a human and reborn as a crab. You're not just any crab though. Your specific species is the Fiddler Crab, a crab with a single large claw that they use to fight and attract mates. Eating is difficult because of your one big claw, but you eat, drink, and have a normal crab life...

Don't forget to drink blood every now and again or you're dead. Have a happy vacation.

Yeah thats mainly because thats really all a hydra is. A powerful multi headed dragon that's only purpose in the narrative it serves in is to be an obstacle for the hero. Now if it were something like the medusa or minotaur, I can work with that, but a Hydra's only thing is to be a scary and...

Then you are a monster that will inevitably slain by a Greek hero in a trial to show their strength, wit, and perseverance.

Well then now you have no free will of your own and have to submit to whatever the man above says. Unless you make a Lucifer move, which then you will be damned into hell for all eternity. Lets be fair though, hell will one hundred percent be better than whatever waiting for us in heaven. You...

So I've read stories where being a vampire, werewolf, zombie, demon, unexplainable blob, centaur, god, snakemen, unexplainably tall men/women, wizards, witches, and reindeer came about due to a curse. I can also now add succubus to the list because I'm writing the only story that I've seen where...

I think I'm good at writing characters and coming up with long lasting plot ideas. How long does my stories normally last? Well the shortest idea I have, being My Succubus Roommate, I imagine it to last for at least 200 chapters. However, I could see it lasting more. Not to mention it goes...

I read the synopsis and that is actually kinda cool. Thanks for the recommendation.

I've always thought that concept is an interesting idea for a story or at least a game. Where a characters perception of reality is what keeps reality real, or a character can only exist if someone remembers said character. However, that type of story will almost be a tragedy. Or maybe a...

Okay so this just happened to me recently and I'm still laughing. If you use prowritingaid to edit your stories, and you put in mankind, then it'll read it as offensive language because it has man in it. I'm laughing my ass off.

I'm going to take unique and twist it into meaning good cause lets be real here, 90% of isekai is either meh or garbage, so being good is kind of unique. So I'm going to say Re:Zero and Mushoku Tensei, probably the best that isekai has to offer, but I'm sure you know them already cause they're...

I can read alot and I can write a lot. I read 200 chapters of One Piece in a day if that gives you an example of my reading speed. I can also write a lot. My current story I'm aiming for nearly 300 chapters, maybe more. I got two stories in my head that can last for around 1000 chapters as well...