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L1aei: Feedback... okay. That's a recipe for greatness or disaster; Answer: When the thermistor is faithfully reporting the correct temperature, everything works right. But crank your thermostat up to 90 and see how comfortable it is, lol. Or turn it down to 45 and see if you still enjoy living...

I'm at the bottom of the barrel for "polite protagonist" but like a baby bird coming up a notch here and there. Hoping for a slow burn on one of my works as I get them on here.

L1aei: (paraphrasing) what even is feedback. Answer: Layman's conception or actual answer, lol. To the layman, feed back is... well, quite anything. Like many things though, there's a more formal definition. Bear with me here, I'm making a point. I used to be into digital electronics design...

oh, do tell. Spill it! We need a "noir" tag, didn't know I could make a tag!

at the bottom of the issue, is that a review of an a-r-t project, at the end of the day... did you like it or not. There's no real right and wrong in any artistic endeavor. But that's not a real review, that's your opinion. I liked a movie. Do I so much care if they used real life effects or all...

what do the demon women look like, anyways. yeah yeah, I heard the propaganda. They take men, deceive them, torture them, make them wish they were never born. *yikes* All right wing propaganda. You believe anything you hear in the internet? Sheesh. Grow up. (turn on the TV, "Demon Girls Gone...

why would the demon hordes have to waste their time and energy fighting us anyways. if they just hang around making themselves available, our women will start writing "romance" and "fantasy" books about getting captured and "taken" against their "will". husband: I want a divorce. I think you've...

I forgot here and main page, are actually two separate websites. found it, had the talk with my followed reader. "Leviathan" has been chopped up. and I have one engaged reader! which is pretty cool.

is there a list of people I set myself to follow. kinda pointless if i cant click on my list to spot check on their profiles.

my obligatory 'science boy' post again. apologies. you can smell 'ozone'. Oxygen is O2. Its a natural covalent bond of the outer electrons of every two oxygen atoms that form a quick natural bond. L:ightning, for example. has enough energy that a small percentage of ozone turns into... O3. its...

I'm not a fan of AI, any more than I am fan of one sentence paragraphs. But this, was fine. consider dropping the --- em dash when you edit. Its a big clue. people accuse non-AI writers of being AI if they use the --- em dash.

for someone who worries about his english prose, your posts read well. You ever try an experiment doing it? You might be okay. I've known german people who speak better english than the natives speak it.

I'll read one chapter of anything. (ask L1ael, i'll even take one for the team, brother, LMAO) cover --- pretty cool. sexy warrior lolly. I got a thing for tomboys that can handle a blade, bet I'm not alone in this kid looks little but tough and resilient. I get tired of the...

yes. you have simply "gotten to know your characters". I assume you can sort of see and hear them int he little movie in your head. That's what I do. It helps when you re-use the characters you're familiar with. by the end of several volumes? Its like they're alive. Lets see a giant sprawling...

the difference between 1st and 3rd, best way to see it easy. think instead its a movie, not a book. where is the camera? that's what will make the little movie in your head as you read. 3rd person, the camera is wherever you feel like sticking it at any moment. 1st person, its mounted on their...

When I was a reader only way back when, I noticed most of my paperbacks were third person. I naturally started writing that way as well. Felt natural. I had read a *few* first person books, but it wasn't the norm for me. I tried first person a couple times early on writing but I didn't like the...