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  1. Gryphon

    Question that’s prob dumb

    I just change mine each month. Keep people guessing on if I'm normal or completely mental.
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    If you don't mind could you check this out

    No problem, its just something all beginner writers do unconsciously. It's better to do it now and have someone criticize you for it, rather than keeping on writing making the same mistakes. I hope to read any future stories you write. Just remember, if you want to get better at something, keep...
  3. Gryphon

    Writing Writing novels

    Well if you're writing low fantasy or sci-fi, then you can get away with explaining jack shit. I remember reading a book called Scythe and it was about the human race becoming immortal thanks to complicated machinery, but it's barely explained at all.
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    If you don't mind could you check this out

    If what you say is true and that you're a beginner, congratulations cause your 90% better than all the other beginners I've read. However, there are still quite a few amateurish mistakes here and there that really bogs down your writing. First of all, you use way too much passive voice. If you...
  5. Gryphon

    Calling all authors

    I remember when I had that huge ego. I remember writing the first ever story I ever wrote for public viewing on StoryFire and I thought that I alone would bring the site up to new levels with my knowledge on storytelling. Long story short, StoryFire's dead, and I'm moving on with a better...
  6. Gryphon

    The Worst Title Ever

    The Omega Fascist Donald Trump is transported to another world and become Beta Cuck Joe Biden.
  7. Gryphon

    What type of author are you?

    Pantser/plotter and intuitive As in I know where I want to go, but I pants the in betweens.
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    How much languages do you speak nya?

    I can only speak english but I'm learning Japanese and German. Yes, Attack on Titan influenced me to learn them. Also they're both just really interesting languages.
  9. Gryphon

    Please recommend me a novel

    There's this little known story here called, My Succubus Roommate. I mean, I have no ties to it. The only reason its in my signature is because I want to support the author. I am in no way the author. No siree. So to support me - I mean - the author some more, why don't you give it a read.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

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  11. Gryphon

    30k Words Every DAY!!!

    I admire the dedication to promote your novel this way, but it's kind of reached a point where it went from funny to kind of cringe. Good effort though to stand apart of the shameless crowd.
  12. Gryphon

    How do you do it???

    I feel personally attacked.
  13. Gryphon

    Kudzu, the Invasive piece of crap

    I always wondered what those vines were called. I see them in pictures all the time and I once saw an abandoned house completely covered in the stuff, but I never knew what it was called.
  14. Gryphon

    The Last to Comment Wins

    You know something I just realized. No one will ever know who actually wins this. The only way for someone to win is if SH shuts down, or at least the forums, but if they're shut down there'd be no way to check. Even if no one comments on here for a month, that's still not a win cause anyone can...
  15. Gryphon

    How do you do it???

    I write around 2k a day. At least I would if I didn't have school work tying me down every goddamn second. Seriously, I'd be releasing a chapter a day if it weren't for the fact I'm in school. Granted I'm graduating in a month so I can finally focus on my writing.
  16. Gryphon

    Would you read further?

    So if I would keep reading or not, I would say no. Mainly because I had a hard time understanding what was even going on. The grammar wasn't that bad either. It wasn't perfect but legible. The reason why I couldn't understand what was going on was because you weren't that descriptive. For...
  17. Gryphon

    Another Noob Post...

    I don't really got all that good advice on advertising, but you can make a signature and put your link to your story which will get people's eyes on it. Considering one person already recognized you from RR that means you got some decent recognition already, and since SH and RR shares similar...
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    Another Noob Post...

    Really? Well when I look at 1000 I think big and I've rarely seen stories outside of the ones from trending get above 1500 on average.
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