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Tsk tsk tsk. English is perhaps the easiest language to write about non-gendered objects/animals. Also, passive voice is now your best friend. 'Sweat ran down Alex' neck, which got an annoyed huff as response. With a quick movement of hands and a clean handerkief with 'Alex' written on it, came...

"Hey friend listen, I know the world is scary right now but... it's gonna get way worse."

Yeah, not internal monologue. A mono-logue is a person either talking to themselves in their mind or out loud using their own voices. The character should be doing it, hence it it a kind of "-logue", instead of narration. If a third party is talking about someone and their thoughts then it's...

Then what you mean is not internal monologue... like, at all, even by definition.

When you say 'internal monologue' do you mean narration of ideas? Or the instant-to-instant thoughts? Because those are completely different and do exist in movies as well. How do you present them in a movie without being a voice over? We literally can't hear other people's thoughts. In Robert...

? Movies have internal monologues too. Quite the number of movies have very important moments where internal monologue is delivered, making the scene hit harder. Interstellar has internal monologues that bring massive impact to the scene. Limitless. American Psycho. Internal monologue is a...

the first one i found when looking for copyright free pictures of forests the second and current one i paid an artist on fiverr and edited it myself

May I introduce you to Khada Jhin, The Virtuoso from League of Legends? He's one of the most deranged psychopaths in fiction and people absolutely love him. Outside of his kit as a playable character, his written persona is amazing, consistent, and one of the best Riot has ever produced. He...

come clean my screen, you made me spit my drink all over my pc with colorectal surgeon

Oh yeah, well if I had to pick it'd be the characters. Their personality and how they approach the different aspects of life can enrich the plot as well. It's symbiotic imo. Characters live the plot, so it's pretty inevitable that one bleeds into the other. It's like the hyperborea meme of game...

I mean... the question itself could be interpreted as either focusing on the river of the boat. If the boat is too heavy it will sink. If the river is too robust the boat sinks either way...

How about plot-driven characters or character-driven plot?

We shall die together on this hill, brother. Futa dark elves are a blessing!

And futas too, right? RIGHT?!

It's not like I like it or anything! You b-baka! But really, there are criticism to it. But there are also good sides to it aswell. The way they present fairytales is okay most of the time. When it's not politically charged of course. The moral of the little text was man vs nature and how even...

1 brazilian years ago, a young master offended a little turtle. "Junior, do you dare?" the turtle spat with a thunderous cry. "You don't have the qualifications!" the young master offered a mocking grin which split his white-jade skin. "You court death!!" the turtle's face changed color. It...

Considering that Technology means "tools and machines that may be used to solve problems" then yes. If you have people living longer than 100 years, then even yesser. If there are monsters in the world, then the yes becomes absolute. Magic is, after all, a tool the characters use. In their...

I'm using your own narrative to argue. It's good that you see the lack of consistency it has under any degree of scrutiny. Spoil? The fiction I reviewed is about a trans person without the tragedy tag, obviously the mc will transition eventually. The plot is about the journey and the emotions...

My own review? Where I point out the failed suspension of disbelief from an objective view while presenting evidence in regards to the themes while simultaniously providing constructive feedback where the author can improve the detached narrative in the setting if they so wish? The spoiler? You...

OP carries a banner while spitting on it. That's my point. OP's ideas crumble when given the slightest scrutiny.