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  1. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] Writing ACTION 1: The Trick to Writing Action Scenes that Work

    Nice. I have a question. What if a character has faster reactions? Like, superhuman reactions. Would the 'beginning of the actions' be described, instead of the full action, and then the characters reactions? For example: The ground cracked, but Superman had already moved away from the...
  2. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    What is your favorite series on this site?

    Any and all with a futanari MC, even those I haven't read yet.
  3. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Make Review tab more prominent

    Was interested to see your own reviews as you are so passionate about it, which I like... but your pofile is hidden from view. Oh, well. While it's true that reviews are mostly opinions, you can't expect every single one of them to be essays about the novel, the style, the characters, the plot...
  4. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    You were isekai’ed, into a modern world. In this world some people have powers (I.E. X-men). You were given the ability to transmute objects. What do?

    Bet, sounds cool... but does the scarlet witch fundamentally understand the fabric of reality when she manipulates it? The superpower you came up with is amazing and lends itself to create cool stories, but there are too many unnecessary restrictions when presented as a superpower. As a spell...
  5. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    You were isekai’ed, into a modern world. In this world some people have powers (I.E. X-men). You were given the ability to transmute objects. What do?

    Lmao this shit is not a superpower then... wolverine has no side effects to his healing like some bullshit limitation to heal his brain. Yeah, he got poisoned by the metal in his body, but that itself is not his power. This transmutation power looks easy af, open google and read the wiki out...
  6. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    Drama? Rage? Trolling? The fuck you on about, buddy? Discussing is healthy.
  7. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    Joya, bet. 'People preaching' is not a professor teaching 20-100 students. You def learned English before me, so don't act as if you dont get the meaning.
  8. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    True, the gate to opportunity is big, but the street you're walking into is too damn toxic that it just doesn't justify it in my eyes. Now you're making me feel old, going to the library to read because there was no online publishing back then... curse you! Patreon is way safer to write a 200k...
  9. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    That's why I added the little 'I don't know the actual numbers', as it's obviously not displayed to the public. I went with the safest number to assume. The matter still stands, why break your back with unnecessary rules if the alternative is as, if not more, profitable and accessible? Look at...
  10. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    First of all, the internet is a frightening place. Second of all, do not doxx the author, or I will chase whoever's ass I need to chase. So, I went down the rabbit hole. Clicking links to various sites you have on your profiles and descriptions to see your work, I found what I assume to be your...
  11. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    I've read Mark Twain, he's no standard, tho. He was a U.S. writer, not a global English authority. Authors on this website are from other countries as well. I don't come and raise Pablo Neruda (Also American, from Chile. America is not a country, it's a continent. Use U.S. Citizen when outside...
  12. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    All this does is promote gatekeeping, even as other creators praise the manuscript(?). This says more about the publishers than the author, so it's a "Well, seems like editors/publishers aren't really that useful anymore." Your comment kind of proves my point that editors/publishers are detached...
  13. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    Now you're smoking something, or actively ignoring other's evidence that disprove the rules you bring up. Nothing is wrong for english if it follows english grammar. Period. You are free to dislike it, but unfortunately you're not on my city's Bookstore shelves so your opinion is just that. An...
  14. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    Yeah, and small studios become AAA because of a game nobody believed in *cough cough* Witcher 3 *cough cough*, but then they try and follow the trend and the entirety of humanity clowns on them. They lose money, they lose respect, they lose trust. Following the rules in the entertainment...
  15. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    This is too similar to the music industry. Producers will say "Nah, this won't sell because people don't like that." Like... who the fuck is the producer/editor to know everyone who might pick the product? Books/Music used to be much more liberal in their expression and contents, especially in...
  16. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    Huh... Paul Scott's "The Jewel in the Crown", book 1 of 4 (The Raj Quartet). First Published in Great Britain in 1966. September, 1979 edition by AVON BOOKS, New York, New York, United States of America. Best Seller at the time.
  17. Biggest-Kusa-Out-There

    Who takes care of the children in your family?

    My wife would take care of work and bringing in money, and I will raise the kids. I will fight with tooth and claw for it if I have to. We'd go to the grocery store, the zoo, the beach, the andes mountain chain so they can play with snow, the museum, etc. I would beat the shit out of them in...
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