Personally I like when 2 or more barely related musical lines play at the same time, if that makes any sense. Here there are 4. If I would change one thing it would be to slightly lower the volume of the track as a whole.
The audio is somewhat better, but if you are willing to wait a few hours it should get even better. Nonetheless below is the piece of music I made. Perhaps I should try uploading a longer loop of it…?
I drew this ‘cover’ for a piece of music. Will post the link when the audio quality gets better on YouTube.
Here is the link. If you wait a few hours the audio quality should get even better, although it is good enough now imo.