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i wished it was an act. if its an act I'd have had hope she'd stop but no i got that its her personality. and i dislike it greatly screen doesn't infer a TV? how do i get to the mana crystal deduction when i get no information on it or the world? she spent hours giggling at them. I get if they...

read up to: How to Break Into a Vault Without Even Trying mixed feelings here. I feel like you can structure a scene, depict a character and establish a plot but you're deliberately choosing not to. this mc is perhaps the most obnoxious character ive come across in a very long time. to start...

i cant read this. genuinley cant. i dont know whats happening but the italic walls of text are fucking with my brain. i might be acoustic why is everything italic?

you need to reach out to the mod team. send them a few messages too dont stop at one. they recommend it because they get a lot of them and can miss some

too JP LN style. id reckon it'll work better on SH than RR. or maybe not since it has no lewd tags. who knows

@Assurbanipal_II post urs

its better than the other one. more focused and there's a proper storyline/progression. comedy is decent. its still isekai slop which is fine but i think you'll hit an issue later on with how many different characters you want to introduce and maintain. good luck with the reaearch. i feel like...

wtf why am i only 10k. youre farming

is this the same as the one above?

read up to: Chapter 9.2: The Promise the most egregious thing in this novel is the cover and your avatar. it has that low-quality ai generated image that screams 2022 and it had me dreading to read this. I was expecting a flashbang of garabge ai generated writing but it never came. and you have...

once am done with the last two i have probably

read up to: Chapter 11: The Saint Tasked With Gathering The Six Heroes hmm hmm. writing quality is decent, the content itself leaves things to be desired. i actually don't dislike the characters as much as i thought i would. I hate shounen and mc is a bit mentally impaired as all shounen mcs...

my personal writing skill is a product of the media i consume. there is no media for me to consume. its the dark ages

that fantasy is in its darkest ages and FL novels are a plague

the one line prose was fluctuting. I noticed it more in later chapters so im thinking you fixed this in earlier chapterd maybe? this is really subjective because i could have misread or just missed ut. you need more eyes to know this for certain. i get what you mean but exactly is the mc's...