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why learn art when ai can do it?

read up to: Little Sister this is an unedited draft. missing punctuation, unformatted, repeatition. bad structure. telling not showing. thought bubbles explaining what literally just happened. Is this a thing now? submitting drafts for reviews? whats the point

probably not. I'm taking a break after these novels too

week has been really busy. read up to: Chapter 5 – Whispers of the night there's a massive drop in quality in this chapter compared to previous ones. not sure why. ive read c4 days ago but im pretty sure im right. quality drop in everything, writing quality, dialogue, flow, structure. It's...

back in my days

havent posted somethin in here in a while

generic was the wrong choice of words. I'd say cliche is more accurate Its not about show vs tell its about the story being relayed through the character's eyes. I find that to be more enjoyable but its subjective. bandits or knights or ara something kindom. they jumped a carriage. tomato tomato

easy i can fix her/him hook

did you read the links i referred to you?

its impossible to give feedback on such a short length of work. this would just be an editing session which is not the purpose of this thread. I skimmed through the first two chapters. this is really similar to ThirstyWater's novel. check the feedback i gave him. I think it'll benefit you. check...

does this have at least 10k words? im going to stress this now for these last 3