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  1. Juia_Darkcrest

    [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?

    No worries... but... if I, or one of your readers, can't read it easily, how would you expect an honest assessment of the scene?
  2. Juia_Darkcrest

    [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?

    I am the opposite of A-Random-Writer. I made it about 1/2 the way through and lost the thread. The fight might make sense, but the paragraph structure is confusing enough that I had to read it several times to figure out who was even talking or doing what. ie; -------------------------------...
  3. Juia_Darkcrest

    What's your biggest strength as a writer?

    Can I also add a 2nd thing? No? Too bad still am I am not afraid to hurt my MC, reducing his plot armour to just not... ending the story LMAO.
  4. Juia_Darkcrest

    Top (7) Baldest SHF members

    Would it help if all the 'Contestants' knew that one of the rewards for winning this contest is the powers of Saitama? All you need to do is admit that your head is bald and accumulate more votes!
  5. Juia_Darkcrest

    Secrets of the one above game

    The one above me brought a pen and a sword to a gun fight to prove which was mightier
  6. Juia_Darkcrest

    Top (7) Baldest SHF members

    Don't worry, Karma is coming. #thanksgiving2026 #turducken #4dudes1duck #duckhuntremake
  7. Juia_Darkcrest

    Top (7) Baldest SHF members

    They are still trying to come up with a name for it. Don't worry though, they will adjust his meds soon enough.
  8. Juia_Darkcrest

    Top (7) Baldest SHF members

    I like the idea of JayMark being a balding cow... Imnotabot is an obvious clanker with no hair... Since OP wasn't on the list, I chose the other duck too...
  9. Juia_Darkcrest

    Ask Envy

    Your thoughts on Pineapples on Pizza?
  10. Juia_Darkcrest

    What's your biggest strength as a writer?

    Improvisation I have a story in my head that I want to tell, but when something begins to feel stale, I can come up with a new idea fairly quickly.
  11. Juia_Darkcrest

    Y'all think I should try a Sugar Mommy harem?

    Now, I ain't sayin' she a gold digger But she ain't messin' with no broke -Radio Edit-
  12. Juia_Darkcrest

    Hypothetical: What is your chosen ceremonial melee weapon?

    I always liked the looks of a sabre with lots of silver inlays. Highly polished of course.
  13. Juia_Darkcrest

    LMAO luv you too my lil Yandere

    LMAO luv you too my lil Yandere
  14. Juia_Darkcrest

    Y'all think I should try a Sugar Mommy harem?

    not really. Dommy implies she is wearing the pants in the bedroom, so to speak, possibly in other parts of the relationship too. It doesn't mean she is paying for everything. Now that doesn't necessarily mean she is into the whips and chains, but she will be in control, whether it is dom acts or...
  15. Juia_Darkcrest

    Y'all think I should try a Sugar Mommy harem?

    one of us! One of us!
  16. Juia_Darkcrest

    Y'all think I should try a Sugar Mommy harem?

    Are you sure you dont want to write it as incest? I hear the gooners just call it by wincest when their author is writing about it. =P
  17. Juia_Darkcrest

    How does LitRPG passive skills level up?

    In my work MFGR, I started off making a system status screen that had a lot of numbers to it, then gave it to every one of his party members too. Then I worked it to look nicer in an Excel doc and had to post links so people could see them. I was beginning to spend more time adjusting/posting...
  18. Juia_Darkcrest

    How does LitRPG passive skills level up?

    That's why you shouldn't take your litRPG system too seriously. It isn't a video game, it is a novel. You have the creative license to level your MC however you want. If you want to have a more rigid system, that is fine, but you are just going to make a lot more work for yourself, which the...
  19. Juia_Darkcrest

    How does LitRPG passive skills level up?

    Did you use a passive or active skill to determine that? ... ... ... I'll see myself out
  20. Juia_Darkcrest

    How does LitRPG passive skills level up?

    Yeah, my writing is kind of a different take on LitRPGs... he hops around to 10 different worlds, some have systems, some don't. His system is basically just keeping his aging body from falling to pieces, and only dribbles stuff to him as he world hops, basicly im a 118 chapters in, and he still...
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