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Afraid so. Most people have to update at least twice a week to keep up appearances. Readers are hungry; and if they don't see enough from you too soon, they lose interest and "change the channel".

How do you decorate a space with a couch? :s_tongue:

Alright, when you say "to decorate a space", would the space be inside a particular room of a typical house? ?

A jacket...?

I'll take a guess. A pillow...?

Is it alive or inanimate?

I wrote a short story once about gang-bangers in Miami squaring off against werewolves, and I REALLY had to work on the lingo before I started this. You see, gangs have their own languages, and because I was dealing with young, black men, I had to be extra careful not to step on toes. I imagine...

I guess I should make some edits then. ?

I think you might have nailed something here. The A.I. bubble is most certainly going to burst, with what you said, because people will not be able to keep up with it. They'll need stronger, faster computers, and won't be able to afford them. No wonder A.I. stocks are being watched like hawks...

I was unaware if you paused the screen with Ralphie fiddling with his Little Orphan Annie decoder pin in "A Christmas Story", you can clearly see the year "1940" etched on the front. The mystery as to exactly what year the movie is set in has finally been solved. ? :blob_party:?

So...how about: 23-year old Darius Myeong-Jun is a member of the popular K-Pop trio City of Angels. But he has a dark secret that only a few of his fans know: he has been a vampire for five years. He leaves a show one night and comes across Antonio Cortez, his best friend’s older brother, lying...

ADD THAT. That is totally going to punch it up even more then... *^^* (I'd read it; I'm just not the BL type) *^^*

Okay, still needs a little more punch to it. This is what I read: "Darius Myeong-Jun is a member of the popular K-Pop trio City of Angels. The kicker is, he has a secret only known to few: he is a Vampire. He became one at 18 years old, and is now 23, only a few fans know of his undead state...

Hmm. Can you do a bit more with the synopsis please? I feel like it's not telling readers enough, and doesn't give them a reason to look.

Actually, a McDonald's vanilla shake does loads of good for depression. ? ?

Wow, me neither. I left Patreon last year so I wasn't sure how much things had changed. That's new!

Very boring synopsis, sadly. . Is there any way you can re-write it and give it more punch? Give us something exciting to read from the start. :love: Also, I agree with the others about keywords/genres. Make sure you simplify them. Get to the bare-bones of the novel and tell us what we'll see...

Go to your memberships, find the creator, and set a clear monthly limit (or switch to a simple monthly subscription) to ensure you only pay $1 per month, no matter how many posts you see.

Like in "The Substance". :sick: :s_eek: ?