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  1. LeilaniOtter

    After a strong start, views on story has stagnated. Need help.

    Afraid so. Most people have to update at least twice a week to keep up appearances. Readers are hungry; and if they don't see enough from you too soon, they lose interest and "change the channel".
  2. LeilaniOtter

    I Spy (but it's unfair)

    How do you decorate a space with a couch? :s_tongue:
  3. LeilaniOtter

    I Spy (but it's unfair)

    Alright, when you say "to decorate a space", would the space be inside a particular room of a typical house? ?
  4. LeilaniOtter

    I Spy (but it's unfair)

    A jacket...?
  5. LeilaniOtter

    I Spy (but it's unfair)

    I'll take a guess. A pillow...?
  6. LeilaniOtter

    Bizarre Memes Thread

  7. LeilaniOtter

    I Spy (but it's unfair)

    Is it alive or inanimate?
  8. LeilaniOtter

    Thoughts of putting racism in your works

    I wrote a short story once about gang-bangers in Miami squaring off against werewolves, and I REALLY had to work on the lingo before I started this. You see, gangs have their own languages, and because I was dealing with young, black men, I had to be extra careful not to step on toes. I imagine...
  9. LeilaniOtter

    Why are my views still so terrible?

    I guess I should make some edits then. ?
  10. LeilaniOtter

    Warning: if you use tools like Grammarly, you need to check the output.

    I think you might have nailed something here. The A.I. bubble is most certainly going to burst, with what you said, because people will not be able to keep up with it. They'll need stronger, faster computers, and won't be able to afford them. No wonder A.I. stocks are being watched like hawks...
  11. LeilaniOtter

    What did you learn today?

    I was unaware if you paused the screen with Ralphie fiddling with his Little Orphan Annie decoder pin in "A Christmas Story", you can clearly see the year "1940" etched on the front. The mystery as to exactly what year the movie is set in has finally been solved. ? :blob_party:?
  12. LeilaniOtter

    Just was curious

    So...how about: 23-year old Darius Myeong-Jun is a member of the popular K-Pop trio City of Angels. But he has a dark secret that only a few of his fans know: he has been a vampire for five years. He leaves a show one night and comes across Antonio Cortez, his best friend’s older brother, lying...
  13. LeilaniOtter

    Just was curious

    ADD THAT. That is totally going to punch it up even more then... *^^* (I'd read it; I'm just not the BL type) *^^*
  14. LeilaniOtter

    Just was curious

    Okay, still needs a little more punch to it. This is what I read: "Darius Myeong-Jun is a member of the popular K-Pop trio City of Angels. The kicker is, he has a secret only known to few: he is a Vampire. He became one at 18 years old, and is now 23, only a few fans know of his undead state...
  15. LeilaniOtter

    Just was curious

    Hmm. Can you do a bit more with the synopsis please? I feel like it's not telling readers enough, and doesn't give them a reason to look.
  16. LeilaniOtter

    Bizarre Memes Thread

    Actually, a McDonald's vanilla shake does loads of good for depression. ? ?
  17. LeilaniOtter

    Patreon Question: Why does it say I have a $5 membership when I set it to $1??

    Wow, me neither. I left Patreon last year so I wasn't sure how much things had changed. That's new!
  18. LeilaniOtter

    Why are my views still so terrible?

    Very boring synopsis, sadly. . Is there any way you can re-write it and give it more punch? Give us something exciting to read from the start. :love: Also, I agree with the others about keywords/genres. Make sure you simplify them. Get to the bare-bones of the novel and tell us what we'll see...
  19. LeilaniOtter

    Patreon Question: Why does it say I have a $5 membership when I set it to $1??

    Go to your memberships, find the creator, and set a clear monthly limit (or switch to a simple monthly subscription) to ensure you only pay $1 per month, no matter how many posts you see.
  20. LeilaniOtter

    Brain be braining.

    Like in "The Substance". :sick: :s_eek: ?
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