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Rest in Peace to Director Rob Reiner and his wife, Michelle, murdered by their son Nick Reiner this afternoon. "The Princess Bride" is my all-time favorite movie. ?

Listening to Harlan Ellison trying to give a lecture on writing. At the end of it, most of the audience was in tears, convinced they'd never be successful writers. :s_tongue: :s_tongue: :s_tongue: :s_tongue: :s_tongue:

Well, @Avarice_of_the_seven got that one. *^^* Good job. (although sunglasses seemed better, since we don't wear sunglasses inside the house) ?

Sunglasses...?

Hmm. Something to do with sports...?

If you saw Queen's Blade, you'd understand. ? I'm betting the bot won't accept this.

How about a game controller...?

And it's not a Barney the Dinosaur plushie....

I would like to pass my turn. @Worthy39 can go next. ?

Yeah, kind of on the nose there. ?

OMG! I have one of these! A Himalayan salt lamp!

I understand. It's just that the bulk of your problem lies in active/passive writing and wrong-sided participles. So...if you look at my example, you can see exactly how to fix things.

Hmm.................how about the sun?

The book would explain everything to you, I'm sure. You can't expect an entire English lesson here. Don't just reach out for advice, find it yourself. You'll feel really good if you do, and you will want to become a better writer. :love: ?

I hate to bring up the obvious but...a flashlight? ?

Yeah, orange isn't really seen much around my room right now. I actually see only one thing orange here; a small toolbox my housemate keeps near some shelves. Is it a toolbox? ? Time for a hint!

Honestly, I wouldn't. That sentence stands fine on its own. ? Seriously, get the book.

is it........an orange? ?

Korean to English is going to be tough! But, let's show you one very good rule right away, between active and passive. "was" proceeding a present-tense verb is too passive. You want to be more active with your scene. So, you could write, "Inside the grand library of Ravenshade Mansion, a young...